Irresistible - Comments

Love it Dustin brown is soo HOTTT!!!

this is an amazing story. the detail was amazing and chemistry was beautiful.

love it love it love it

O I LIKE THIS!!!

I love the detail in how they are, I love the rolling around in the early morning sheets!! Such a great little story.
The characters are very good.. I wish I knew more about them. Good job!
Lots of luck in the contest.

I loved it! Honestly think that's the best way to summarize my thoughts.
I thought the character development was done very smoothly even though it was condensed into a one-shot and the attention to details makes the writing really come to life. You had no idea how much I was nodding when I read about the traffic in L.A.
I think that the length was great too, it wasn't too long and flowed well which, allowed me to read it easily.
Overall I think the writing was perfect, characterization great, and story line was smooth flowing and entertaining to read.

Perfect length, perfect characterisation, perfect subject matter. You've done a superb one shot. it's cute, witty and entertaining. you should be really really proud. I hope you win ^^ you have my vote

Ou sexy times! This was really sweet. I really liked it :)

Aweeee, I absolutely love this!
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I could read it over & over again, Dustin Brown SEXX = love :P
hahaha

Awwww you used my name in your Dustin Brown story. I don't know what to say.:-)

This was very sweet - and my idea of romance, sex first, love later. hehehe. Sorry to all of you that it offends.

I like a strong female character - love it when she's in control. Good Work on this.