Hellingly - Comments

Dude, I was so fucking confused you have no idea. I was like trying to read impossibly face so that I could keep up with the action and just...shit man. That was intense. I'm not going to lie I totally was thinking of this movie The Invisible, I think that's what it was called. And I don't even think this is anything like it but that movie was constantly in my head the entire time I read this. But honestly, fantastic bbgirl. That was totally awesome.

Okay, so I'm really glad you had the explanation in the third part because I was so lost for a moment there. Everything seemed so fast-paced. When he got stabbed I was just crazzzyyyy. And then he woke up and reported it and I was just confused. But then when he explained it it all made sense. Very good job on this. :)

Okay, so when I saw Hellingly, I automatically thought of Hellsing. *is a psycho fan* xD Well, I'll say that Alex is a truly interesting character. I mean, abandoned places?! Good Lord. I think he's a thrill seeker xD
Anyhoo, this flowed so wonderfully. Everything was perfect (: Great job! <3

This was good to read, and it served the purpose of it's genre perfectly.
It flowed really well :)

Mmm, I loved it.
Very, very good job.
Again, perfect grammar/spelling/punctuation, from what I saw.
I think I was genuinely scared for a bit whilst reading it!
Once the contest is over, I shall notify you of whether or not you've placed.
Thanks!

A very chilling read. Although I like that you gave the ghost purpose. So many stories like this just have evil ghosts that are hurting people for no reason. I like it more when it's more misunderstood anger, or trying to prove a point. It makes more sense to me that way.

Great job!

Oh, my goodness!
I love it!
I can't wait for the next parts.

Just a note - from what I saw, your grammar is almost impeccable. Thank you for that, and you will be receiving extra points for it!

Oooo! Creepy! Can't wait to see where this goes! Ghosties and all that!