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Seriously, the most amazing thing I've ever read. Your way with words blows my mind. It feels so detailed without being repetitive and boring. silvery eyelids closed over hazel eyes That's my favorite out of the whole thing, it's just so amazing. I can't even.

Thank you so much for entering. :D

This is amazing. I love it and I enjoyed reading it a lot.
You're a real talent indeed. Keep up the very good work(:

To start off, I really love the simple title you gave this. And even though the story itself was rather short, the characters were very realistic. I love the small details you put into it, and the writing style was gorgeous. All of the descriptions were beautiful, actually, I could picture the sunrise and the setting so well. I love what you did with your three words, and how the mentions of them didn't disrupt the flow of the story - which was remarkably smooth. Overall, I thought that it was stunning.

This is absolutely incredible. I'm in love with your writing style.

Why are you such a good writer?
I loved this :B it was epic,
it was so cute <3<3<3
I am having a thing where Ima read yer stories for my enteratinment :D Y'know since ya left me, jk!
I loved this so much though!!!!

One word; beautiful.