With This Gun. - Comments

Great job! Now more updates! hah.

OMG! cliffhanger much? lmao. l loved it. your writing of style is wonderful. contiune to write Rage.

This is really cool!

Your writing style is better than most.

your great loves you lots

i like it a lot cant wait for the rest

I like it a lot! It's really interesting and different. :]

very good!
i liked it alot, well written and sounds alot like Twilight. It's awesome
good job Rage ^^

sounds like a series of unfortunate events crossed with an interveiw with a vampire good books tho and the story is hgreat too

Oh, I definately like where this is going. Please, update soon!

Ah, just finished chapter 3, as well. (I'm a bit of a fast reader, lol...)

The only problem, so far, is that you've left me off with a cliffhanger! How rude! ;p

Can't wait for more, hon!

Thanks for telling me about the other two chapters, love!

I just finished chapter 2, and you've definately caught my attention. I love stories that take place in the early 1900's; that time period could give any writer many chances for an interesting storyline.

Very well written! I'm impressed.

I like your writing style. Rather Lemony Snicket-esque, especially at the end. And the character that is narrating the story intrigues me.

Great start!