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    Okay wait. I just confused myself.
    But whatever, you're amazing, and this story is love.
    March 30th, 2011 at 09:46pm
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    So, I swear I didn't get the email that this had been updated. But I'm so glad that you did! I missed this story so much.
    I just finished chapter five, and yes, I did fall in love.
    March 30th, 2011 at 09:43pm
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    Okay, yeah, that was totally beautiful and worth the wait.
    drunk Anna and drunk John Oh go perfectly together.
    March 23rd, 2011 at 04:42am
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    Yay! Update!

    "I told you to wake him up, not fight him," My dad chuckled, cauisng me to roll my eyes.
    I don't know, but for some reason that made me laugh. A lot.

    This was great, I just found the conversation with her dad to be really funny. Oh, and John was cute. Duh.

    This is getting better and better, and I can't wait for another update.
    September 2nd, 2010 at 06:38pm
  • love only knows

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    So, just found this fabulous story.
    And it totally spoke to my farmer at heart :)
    Not to mention it spoke to the crazed The Maine fan in every part of my being, haha.
    John and Anna are adorable together, even though they aren't together...
    Did that make sense?
    Lets hope it did...
    ANYWAY;
    Yeah, I did fall in love the past chapter :)
    I mean, it doesn't take much with Johnohh... :D
    September 2nd, 2010 at 07:12am
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    i did actually haha
    Johno's a cutie
    September 2nd, 2010 at 06:35am
  • Swismis92

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    amazing chapter! can't wait for the next one!
    so i was just looking at your tumblr & saw that you went to the maine/wtk concert at oasis. i was there too! that was a mighty fine concert :)
    August 9th, 2010 at 07:10am
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    Okay, so I've been away for a while so i couldn't read this update.

    It was great... I think my favorite part was when she thought Garrett was his boyfriend...I definitely wasn't thinking the same thing.
    update sooooooon!
    <3
    August 2nd, 2010 at 01:28pm
  • am0rtentia

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    This sounds cute, I hope she opens up to him soon and the same thing to him, of course. :)
    July 22nd, 2010 at 09:54am
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    I don't know why I'm just now reading this, but I love it!
    Great job on the new chapter. :)
    July 22nd, 2010 at 02:52am
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    Oh mai gawd, I've found pure bliss.
    It was about time someone wrote something different! :D

    I can't wait for when you update again, totally looking forward to it! <3
    July 7th, 2010 at 10:34am
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    Aaaah! I really, really, really like this. =)
    Very creative idea and pretty decent writing skills! Can't wait for the following chapters
    July 5th, 2010 at 08:24am
  • Let Love Guide You.

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    I likkkeee, it sucked me in :) Update soon mah dude !
    July 3rd, 2010 at 05:53am
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    Okay. I'm totally in love with John. "I'll be your friend
    LOVE.
    You need to update again. Even though it was short... it was still good.
    UPDATE.
    -Lillie.
    July 1st, 2010 at 03:48pm
  • Supersonicskyline

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    i adore this story! johns cute and i like that ann is like a typical farm girl! looking forward for more
    June 30th, 2010 at 12:20pm
  • i am the avalanche.

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    I'm so glad to see that Anna's still holding up the way I want her too. She's not gushing about how cute John is, and blah blah blah. She's also not giving into him--she still kept her secrets. I love her :D

    This was too short! :( Update soon!
    June 29th, 2010 at 11:10pm
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    When do you update this?
    I want these two to jump on each other. Okay, I'm a weirdo ahaha
    But really, the story is starting very well, keep going :)
    June 28th, 2010 at 10:31pm
  • i am the avalanche.

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    A lot of really good reading is going to get done, this summer. I'm glad to add this to my list.

    I'm really like Anna already. She seems a lot different than most girls. She likes the farm, she isn't freaking out that a cute boy is going to live with her this summer. She's going to be a fun character to watch grow. I'm also excited to see how exactly you portray John Oh. It seems to me that he's always the cocky ass hole who turns sweet, or the shy cute guy who has to man up.
    June 13th, 2010 at 09:12pm
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    This was a great update, really.
    I like the way you write, it's different, in a good way.
    I love this story. Really, I do.
    Especially 'cause of John Ohh's sexiness.
    So, you should definitely update soon.
    Love, Lillie.
    P.S. I should be a part of it because I love this story a lot already,
    and because I'm awesome, and because you know my name, a
    nd I really want to be in it. =D
    June 7th, 2010 at 09:30pm
  • TalkingIsMyLife

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    Ooh, I just found this and I love it! I'd love to be a part of it!
    June 5th, 2010 at 05:03am