At Last - Comments

awww I know this is like way way way late but thanks for reading my stories.

OOOHHHHHH MMMYYYY GOOOSSSHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay i just started reading this and I am LOVING IT!!!!!! there is not enough good mcfly stories out there, that's why i wrote my own so i could do it the way i like it but then since i'm done with that i'm like, i need something to read and just my luck i found this one and it's great!!! i'm only on chapter five but i can't wait to keep on reading!!!!!!!

This story is great. Except the whole unprotected sex thing, you do realise there is this amazing thing called the morning after pill, which one can buy in any chemist no questions asked? It just feels like a plot whole when you consider that you've mentioned her having sex Ed, which she would of certainly learnt about it and Tom would probably know about it from previous gfs you know? However bar that it's a great story :-) good work XDD

I really like your Story so far. I'm on chapter 4 now and I can't wait to keep reading!

It's over? I am heartbroken. Beautiful ending, though. =) I'd love for you to continue writing but not with this story. I think you ended it perfect<3

oh my god.......i just took 2 days reading this and it's AWSOME.....i love your descriptions they're AH-MAZING and i like the way you word everything.....you have a few minor grammar problems but its probably just from typing besides that this is oerall an incredible story that i'd love to continue to read.

Mmm sexy-time!

Why did you think this was so awful? It was good! They're all happy :) Kade likes happy.

Boo poor sick Tom :( But Jenny's gonna take care of him. Right? Or they're both gonna be sick and miserable. Aww. Looks like they wont be visiting Danny...

I so love you right now. AMAZING update! But no Kiera, and you know she's my favorite character ;)

Her mom is freaking awesome! Leaving her asshole dad. Go mom! Is that going to pop up again? Well, during their wedding it might ;)

Mmm going to bed happy. Fo sho. Haha

'"What's catalyst?" Danny whispered to Dougie'<---AWESOME!!!

Ahhh love it :)

Aww. They're both so miserable. I kinda like it ;) But we know it will get better! duh!

Yay fighting ;)

And now the drama begins...bwa ha ha ha! I wonder how she'll treat Alex. If there was a picture of her at lunch of the two of them, now would it have been Alex who did it? I mean, they could always say it was staged. I'm sure they can get some good excuses together.

And Kiera. Wonder how THAT'S gonna go down. And what are they going to tweet? Oh Twitter...

Well, at least now there isn't yelling. And Kiera wasn't in this chapter enough to be a bitch. Even though she still is.

I love how cute Tom is in this chapter :)

Writing this as I read...

"I just...I'm so...flabbergasted, Jennifer." <---Flabbergasted=fantastic word :)

Go Jenny! You tell yo momma!

"Well, I've SEEN him - we've both seen the pictures of you kissing. He's..."

"Gorgeous, isn't he?" I smiled." <---aww yay mommy!

Yay for the L word!

Oh my god I want to murder Kiera. Hardcore. Seriously, doesn't Kiera think? She has to live with Jenny. I think Jenny should freeze Kiera's underwear for payback ;) But then that will start an all out war. But still. I think Kiera's underpants should find their way into a freezer...I wonder how she will deal with it. I figure Tom's used to it. But Jenny...and Daddy DEFINITELY isn't going to like it. But maybe if she explains that her shitty roommate is trying to make her miserable, he'll go with it? Maybe Kiera just wants the room to herself.

Now I wanna find my pointe shoes... :( I think my last pair finally wore out.

Hahahaha So Tom's not into weird shit. That we know of...there could be a fetish we don't know about yet...

Jenny certainly has exploded into a sex kitten, now hasn't she? Very adventurous too.

Birth control. Yessssss. She should anyway. Condoms aren't full proof. Well, that's one way for them to stay together. He could knock her up...

Dirty pictures=bad idea. Just saying.

And her stupid parents. I'd be SO angry if my parents tried to pull some move like that.

And Kiera's a bitch.

Amazing story! :D

The end was so dirty! hahaha

But they're so cute in the beginning :) And their friends? Hilarious.

Porn? Oh Jenny. Dirty little Jenny...Someone has a high sex drive now. Well, it will certainly keep things interesting.

Awww cuteness.

Oh the power of twitter.

And Kiera's a bitch. I have a feeling she's going to be not so nice...spreading rumors, maybe taking some of her stuff. Idk. She just rubs me the wrong way. She seems the type to do anything to profit off of Jenny and Tom's relationship.

'"I will. Have you written that paper yet?"

"Shhh," Carrie said.

"What paper?" Tom's mom asked.

"Oh, nothing," she said' <---sooo me!

Mmmm showering together...and breakfast...

Moving in together! Aww they should. Although mommy and daddy are not going to be happy. I have a feeling she will be getting a very displeased phone call soon. And how much longer would they have to live together after her parents leave?

Oh papers...why did you have to remind me that I am still in school? Darn!

I need a cold shower after that one! Ha you did warn me. I can't really say Matt's a douche anymore :/ unless he comes back into the picture. Ooo her parents. Yep, he'll be back.

And Kiera's a bitch. New send off. Yes I'm enjoying the bliss :)

Well, Matt's still a douche. But I feel like he's almost less of a douche?

Now Kiera. THAT'S a douche. How rude! I wonder if she chased after Tom. And if he was pissed enough to take her back to his place.

That would be so much drama. Please don't!!!

Cuteness :) Jenny is very naughty though. I like it! It's always the sheltered ones that explode...

Oh twitter. And now all the little girlies will be ALL over her. I wonder how she'll deal with that. She didn't do so hot with the press, but that was more because of Matt. Right? Her twitter sn reminds me how young she is too. Will that play a factor?

And you're awesome. But you already knew that.

I want the snow storm to end. You know why? Matt.

And Matt's a douche.

He got in the way during this chapter without really doing anything. He's like a dark cloud hanging out over them. Or like an infected wound: gross and annoying. Something you really don't want.

And Tom is like cake. Really good cake. I'm partial to funfetti cake with rainbow chip frosting. Butt hat's just me. Or something desirable like cake since you're picky and might not even like cake. If not, switch it to something you do like. So she can have an infected wound, or cake/something equally good. Hmmm...tough choice, tough choice. I'm leaning towards cake. But man, infected wounds really get me going...

ewwwww

When I finished this I literally let out a contented sigh. I almost believe in love after that...

Boobs eh? Good for her. Getting a little down and dirty. Prediction? He's gonna wake up, she'll be making breakfast in that stuff from VS. Do they have VS readily available abroad?

I love fluffiness :) and v neck shirts. And boys in v neck shirts. And Tom. And Tom in v neck shirts.

And Matt's a douche.