The Redemption of Peter Wentz - Comments

@ summerlin
Oh my gosh that would be great. :) thank you so much.

@ hollowfirefly
Um, I don't have KIK but I'll give you my email on pm if you want.

@ summerlin
Also I was wondering if you had KIK or email or a way to contact? I am writing a fanfiction at the moment and was wondering if you could help give me tips or if you're interested possibly co-write. It's all if you have time or want to :) I understand if you can't but I just wanted to ask because I love your writing.

@ summerlin
Thank you so much ^-^ A lot of people are on Archive of Our Own so I know this story would get lots of hits. It's absolutely amazing and thank you for replying. It really means a lot. You're one of my favorite authors :)

@ hollowfirefly
Wow. Holy shit. Thank you. I never considered it, but I'll try and make one if other people really want to read it.

By the way, your THROAM icon. Love it.

I read this beautiful work of fiction a couple months ago. I just never knew how to say how amazing it is. But now I think all I can say is that it's beautiful. The writing, the plot, the characters, it's gorgeous. I was wondering if you could post this and the sequel on Archive of Our Own? My friend wants to read it but doesn't have a Mibba account to read the sequel. Thank you so much for posting :)

I am going to enjoy this. Expect comments as I read~

(comment swap) Wow, I am very impressed by the detail in your descriptions and imagery. These are in perfect balance with your dialogue, so all in all very good writing technique. The concept is very compelling. If I could recommend anything, I would just like to say maybe you should consider editing your layout. It appears I'm not the only one suggesting this, and it's true - enlarging your font even just a tiny bit would make this good story much more visually appealing to a reader.

your story is so detailed and descriptive, it also has a very good story line and im a sucker for all your character usage.
One thing i would suggest though is to look at your layout increase the size of your text cause it is rather small. though thats all the negative i can come up with :)

This is a very, very good story! Comment swap brought me here but I'm really glad that I got a chance to read it. Flawlessly written, very well descriptive as well as a meaningful story line. It all ties together very nicely and I think this is an awesome story to have as a finished product :)

Comment Swap brought me here. This story is really well written and uses a lot of description. It is much better than I could ever even HOPE to do. and it is completed meaning, obviously, that it won't continue, but you should keep the writing up, it sounds more like a professional did it! :)

Holy shit the way you've written this and I cannot believe it is completed and the bond in this and omg its beyond amazing.

Your writing style is so genuine and I love the chapter titles and your knowledge of music aghhh it makes me have faith in people again and the last few chapter were so good I'm probably going to be reading this again and again in the forseeable future hahaha

this is possibly the most perfect story i've ever read <3 i got linked to it on tumblr, and just fuck. your characterization of william being so perfectly controlling, so in your face and calculating, but still able to make mistakes... ugh, so. perfect. brendon, oh my god, brendon and pete and their bond! how can i express my love for this? and then all the brotherlyness among the sane!vamps and the humans, and then patrick what will joe and andy do? i'm the biggest sucker for well written dandyverse fics, and this literally made me flail and squee and cry all at the right points. with the end, how it flashed back so much but it led up to that final scene, it was the best way you could've done it. and the last couple of chapters tied the story up in a brilliant way, i can't even explain to you how much i enjoyed reading this.

on top of this, your writing style is honestly to die for. you never bore us, and you keep the plot moving along in the best of ways. your description is perfection, and i think the only crit i have is how hard the layout is to read from.

That works for me. :D I like it and won't complain. I'm glad Brendon and Pete are staying together and Jon and Andy are doing their own thing. Feels real to me. :)
Again, I LOVED IT! I will be reading this story over and over again.

this was amazing , you did amazing job with this story :)

T.T AHHHHHHHHHH! The edges of my eyes burn with tears of happiness and I can't see! Bravo. Bravo indeed. I have no words for an ending like that. Its more then I could ever imagne. Take a bow and another, you deserve it. This has been such a ride for me and I love it with everything I have. This forever will be my favorite peice of yours.
I'm so proud of them. :D Your characters made me feel so much through this story and I can't believe it's over but with a ending like that I can't complain. I'm going to be sitting here all night reading this over and over again.
You. Are. God. :D At least in my eyes.

More more more please!! This is really great!!!

I love your story. please write more!

I really like this story! It's freakn awesome!

I feel like it's Christmas with all the updates. XD
I've said it before and I'll say it again, I am an addict to this story. It's never enough.