A Chance to Walk Away - Comments

This was really good! (:

I liked that the one-shot itself was unconventional in the sense that it wasn't entirely about love but, did take on a subject that does occur within some couples' marriages. I think that you did approach it in a different manner too since both of them are guilty of infidelity but, do admit to still loving each other even when they gave into temptation or in Avery's case cheated in response to Sharpie cheating.

It's different, that's what I like most about it and obviously they're going to have to work to resolve all their problems but, the song choice is a good representation of the situation.

Loved it! What I loved is that its not the typical cheating scenerio. Both cheated whereas its usually just the one person who is doing it.
Anyways, I really liked it :)