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  • skylena

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    That was awesome :D
    August 29th, 2011 at 01:15am
  • Cereal Killer

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    "There is nothing like a bloodbath to ease the mind of a killer." Brutal, I love it.
    I love all the action but it still had a pretty cool plot.
    I like Axel, he's cool, gangster vs. his own gang. Awesome Smiley
    May 22nd, 2010 at 04:18am
  • the fallen.

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    Cry OH MY GOD!
    You made me cry. XD

    God, I loved it so much.
    This was by far the best (not because it was about me). tehe
    I loved it. Arms
    May 22nd, 2010 at 01:12am
  • fen'harel

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    OMGYES That was amazing, Tara!

    The descriptions are brilliant and the dialogue is just perfect for the situation.

    I loved the plot, the characters and how realistic they seemed (and imagining Axel in a gangster suit Ohhhh Happy face).

    I love the ending; I honestly thought I was gonna cry and I was even prepared for it, but I'm so glad that you didn't kill him; that he still has a chance to find Haruko and run away together.

    Brilliant.
    May 21st, 2010 at 03:45am
  • moxie;

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    That. Was. Sexy. Weird SEXY AS HELL.

    Happy face I KNEW YOU WOULD DO A GREAT JOB! So so so so well written! You get 1,00,000 million good jobs from me! I love the words that you used. The intensity at the end was extremely engrossing. :D You nailed the Mafia right to the point. Arms Very good!
    May 20th, 2010 at 04:15am
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