Oh Baby, I Deserve Better. - Comments

Not too sure what happened with this story, but I just randomly stumbled across it, and... I'm sad to see it was never finished. :(
This and the first installment are pretty amazing stories. Perhaps you lost inspiration, had personal stuff going on, didn't get enough feedback... a lot of reasons could be why you stopped writing, but I figured I'd leave a comment to let me know if you ever by some miracle continued this, I will be here to read it.
Because I would like to see an ending for this family. It's unfortunate it stopped where it did because here I'm just left to assume that Alex left. Maybe... again I'm not too sure seeing as where it left off.
But yeah, I'm sorry I wasn't around when you were originally posting it. Because I would've commented a lot, and gave you feedback throughout. But alas... I've just recently developed an interest in ATL fanfics.
But anyway, if you don't continue, which, since it's been a few years, I don't really doubt... I can't blame you. Because I myself have lost inspiration for stories and I just haven't finished them for various reasons. Although the main one being that I've been busy and just life gets in the way.
But anyway, you are a great writer and I hope at least you're still practicing the craft. It would be unfortunate to let such a skill go to waste.
I loved this story because you put in dramas a lot of readers don't typically do; like I can say for a fact this is the first Alex story I've read where he's been involved with drugs. Which is weird because I've read quite a lot of Alex stories... but that definitely makes yours unique.
And there are fewer stories I come across where Alex has a kid too. Probably cause it's difficult to imagine, but you made it work.
I enjoyed the sweet parts of this story. Very cute. And I was sad when she lost the second baby, but I had a feeling something would happen. :( Like, it just seemed a little too perfect. Heartbreaking that she carried that long though and then to not hear the heartbeat. :(
Once again, I enjoyed these two stories and if one day you somehow find yourself coming back to it, I'll be here to read the rest of it.

please please update :D

awesome update..can't wait to read the next one

no dont leave it like that !! update soon pleaseplease !!

:'[ sad dayyy
what if it wasn't his? like he was selling it but not using it?
there has to be a way for her to forgive him!!!! :o

:( :( :( this is sooooooo sad

omgg!! coke?! gahhhhh alex is dumbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

alex, you bad boy!!! just pull it together allready!

awww I hope Josie gets to feeling better.
And I'm glad their relationship is better....I hope it stays that way.
I haven't liked the way Alex has been acting..he should have been there for his family.
I'm happy he admitted what he did was wrong.
Anyways...great chapter!
Update soon!
I want to know what happens next!!

loving this story so far

OH NO!
I would be a complete mess if I lost my baby like that!
Gosh, Alex! Such an idiot! Drunking and smoking? With a baby around? Tisk, tisk. That boy needs to have some sense beat into him!
I'm hooked on this story!
Update soon!
I really want to know whats gonna happen!

awww yayyy :]
updateeeeeeee

I was so happy to see you updated!!
It was a great chapter!
I'm glad that she realized that it's not fair to Josey to not be around her parents....
Update soon please!!

I read "Oh Baby, You Can Do So Much Better" and this story in one sitting....it's so amazing.
Couldn't stop reading. I love it. :)
I feel bad for her... :( hopefully she will get better.
Josie is adorable!!!
Update soon :D
<3 Kelsey

aww poor alex :[ he can't handle it anymore O.o

More :)

Ohaiz. (:
I love this story, I just started reading it tonight.
Hotsecks is goodsecks.
That's so sad about her baby. ):
Update again soon pleeease? :D

Awww :( that's so horrible. My aunt had that happen three times :/
Hopefully things will get better? :)
Updateeee <333

i feel so bad for her. my mom went through the same thing.

Omg noooo :(