Allow Me To Introduce Myself - Comments

Awhhhh, that was really super cute(:
I absolutely loved it<333
One thing though, it actually felt a little bit rushed,
so for a suggestion, I think that you should slow down a little.
Otherwise, that's about it.
The idea was so cute and sweet, and I loved how you incorporated the quote<3
Overall, you did a fantastic job<3 Good luck!
xo

Awww , so cute! In my opinion. I love your style of writing.

This was excellent quality writing. The grammar was impeccable. I thought it was fantastic. The manner that it was written was also so cute. I loved how it was like he was telling Ashton the story. It was such a great format. I did enjoy it very much so. The technical aspect was spot on, and that always helps to make a great story!

Now onto the creative aspect. This was also a very nice competent you had. The plot I loved, it was original and kept me interested. I didn't want to stop reading! It was adorable and I loved how Travis was extremely charming. I also loved that Ashton was the shy one. I think that, there was something deep and true to the story which made it all that more believable. The use of the quote, was amazing. It came at such a perfect time. So great job there.

In the end, the story was great and amazingly written! =D So the best of luck to you in the contest!

Very cute. I loved it. It's my kind of story as you know. I like Travis' confidence. It was charming.