I really kinda liked the chapter when they talked about having sex, an then had their little fight about whos fault it was that she got hurt![: Its GREAT!
I Hate you again for making wait with another cliffhanger!!!! More soon?? No scratch that im going away to camp so take the updates slow so i dont come back to thousands and thousands of chapters to read!!!!
Amazing chapter!!! My favorite parts are when you make Brian seem like a really caring guy!!! i also love that you made Ashleigh such a trooper!! Great chapter!! More Soon??