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I still love this story. I never get sick of rereading any of your work. And I'm diggin' the new layout. (:

Oh my gosh! I LOVED this story! Update soon, please! This story has a TON of potential and I can't wait until I get to read more! Very good job!

I liked how you wrote "but some people still believe in Christ" as if it's a very distant thing like actual mythology. I thought it was very clever also tying in the story of Adam and Eve and that people shouldn't know everything. It kind of sent shivers down my spine. It's reminds me of every story that has a messed up government system like The Giver, Farenheit 451, and The Bar Code Tattoo. I think it's my favorite to read, probably because of my opinions on our government and fascination with other countries'.

And I know exactly what you mean. Pretty much all my stories have rough beginnings because everything I thought up, all the epicness and awesome sauce climaxes, happen much later in the story. That's why a lot of the time I find myself writing scenes out of order.

Okay, my attention is definitely caught. This story sounds too unique & fascinating to pass by. I'm looking forward to the rest.

Wow. I really think this story is fantastic. Keep it up! I'm interested to see what happens next. :]

This sounds like it's going to be epic!
I am soo curious right now
& I'm already in love with your writing style.

i am very curious as to where this is going.
so update soon

i am very curious as to where this is going.
so update soon

Okay, first, I love the layout and banner. Really cool! Second, I loved the beginning of this. It's all mysterious and creepy sounding. Klaus sounds sort of cool from what I read, haha!
Subbing this as well (: <3

It was really good. I liked it. I really liked the idea of it too, but I wish it was longer. To me, it seems unfinished, but whatever, it's still awesome. =]

I loooove this story. And I like how you used Gracie's face in the layout.