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I'm bawling. That was adorable.

:D

Oh my goodness....this was SO deep and sad.
I absolutely LOVED it.
And this song, its one of my favorites; you made it work perfectly, which a lot of people have a hard time doing with a song fic.
But I can't believe this is what you come up with after your break from writing! Its like you pulled a rabbit out of a hat.

Great Job (:

So not gonna lie - I'm crying. And it takes a lot to make me cry. Bravo, bravo. Everything about this story is perfect. How it goes from the funeral to the flashback and then to his little girl. All of it is just... perfect. There really is no other way to put it. :)

Wow. That was great, I have sooo many amazing writers that I must choose from and you are definitely one of them my dear. : ]
This was such a great representation of the song that I probably would never have thought of in my life. Using the song lyrics as his words were a great way of truly capturing my attention.
And the little girl at the end that was his. Gosh she seems so cute.
But anyway, enough of my blabbering. This was wonderful, fantastic, and truly amazing.
Thanks for entering this!

Much love;

I'm crying, this just got deep to me. I loved the way you wrote it, it's so beautiful and everything just fit so perfectly. It told a whole story in just a one-shot, which is one of the things I love so much about it. This is so absolutely perfect, and the last part just broke my heart even more.

Hun, this was so great! I'm glad you got the opportunity to write again. I'm being honest when I say I loved it.