Broken Skin - Comments

I think you should write more of this, people need to hear more of this story, and maybe think twice before hurting someone else. Write on xxx<3

I think you wrote this story well and the way you describe it, is amazing!
I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it.
There is one mistake in chapter three slowly, you forgot the y but other then that, you did great.
Keep it up!!

I really like this, even tho it's short, I think that it's agreat topic to write about. Keep writing, I want to read more :)