That was beautiful. Simple, no complications. Yet there was so much to it, all those confused emotions. It was simple in such a way that it wasn't, but it appeared so. Does that make sense? I'm not sure. It's hard to describe such a writing style, to define it. But it brings absolutely everything into perspective- it brings what you want us to see in it. Could it have ended differently? I don't know. Maybe, maybe not. But that's part of the story's purpose- we'll never know. It was really brilliant.
Alright, the ending did slap you in the face, but come on. If he lived it would have been a stupid story. Personally, I loved it and think you will place if not win. Good job an' good luck. ;)
Whoa, I thought this was going to be like the movie Remember Me, but it's clearly better. I like how she struck him dumb - per se? - for only a few seconds. The ending really slaps you in the face D: This was amazing. <3 Good luck and thanks for entering!