Master of Time - Comments

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Stunning. It was happy and cool in the beginning, but I absolutley adored how you twisted in the end. Fantastic.

This was simply beautiful, I loved the description and time (no pun intended, seriously) you seem to have put into it. It was all very dream like and flowed smoothly.

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That was amazing.
I've never read anything like it but I loved it.

Wow, that was.... *moves fingers around randomly* absolutely gorgeous! Your style and description is just captivating and spellbinding. I wish I was as controlled as you are with your words, too.

Very good. Loved it.

Very interesting turn on the Secret Garden,
Gothic Horror type stories are my favourites <3

Thanks for entering =D

This was really beautiful (: I loved the picture and the details. It was like reading water - it's so clear and smooth!
One cannot find their way out of the garden again. Unless, of course, the master of time decided to be merciful.
^ The most beautiful ending I'd ever read.
Great job! Good luck and thanks for entering <3

An interesting idea x]. b(^.^)d. A cool one as well.
It was like reading a poem. I loved how it moved from it centring around the girl to the cruelness of time!
Job well done my friend and good luck in the contest!! XD