Personally, I think you should start over, and have a true plot in mind. This story is a little confusing, because while things are happening in the chapters... nothing is really happening in the story. I don't understand what the characters are leading up to. I get that you want them to fall in love eventually, but what will the obstacles be? As a tip I learned, it really helps to get your characters mapped out before starting a story. Personality, likes, dislikes, fears, what they want, what they need, etc. That can help to shape your story a bit more. Again, i'm always available to help. Maybe if you tell me what you want the story to be about, and what you want the characters to be like, I could actually try to write a possible first chapter for you, or some character drafts? Just let me know. Maybe I just need to read this story over...
March 20th, 2013 at 04:45pm