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  • bleeding disaster

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    this story reallt hit me it made me cry and laugh and feel warm, you really have potential

    BTW its skyler
    March 23rd, 2008 at 02:02am
  • AymeeZombie

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    wow you cant believe how much i loved this story .
    its the best fan fic i've read in a LONG time sweetie :)

    aymee xo
    February 25th, 2008 at 08:55pm
  • XxK-Wyle

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    *sighs* parker is so anal about things. i swear...

    *goes and read sequal*
    February 24th, 2008 at 04:32am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    oh my god oh my god oh my god
    no alex cant die!
    I hope the babies are okay!!!
    February 22nd, 2008 at 04:43am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    goodness I forgot how long each update you write is!
    February 18th, 2008 at 06:27am
  • XaccidentalXkissesX

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    NO! Parker shouldn't think it takes money to be happy! Screw Alex's mom for making my gay ex-roommate sad!
    February 13th, 2008 at 01:43am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    I looked like a raccoon?
    when?

    *hugs Alex*
    Parker does need to change cause he's being an ass,,,

    more?
    January 30th, 2008 at 05:26pm
  • XxK-Wyle

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    why is parker so fucking stubborn!

    how the hell can he be homophobic if hes gay???

    its so confusing!
    January 28th, 2008 at 02:05am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    it was long and AWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    adorable

    really adorable

    I loved it

    more soon?
    January 26th, 2008 at 06:43am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    YAY!
    you updated!
    that was adorable!
    I'm glad that Alex is going to be okay.
    =]
    more?
    January 12th, 2008 at 06:31pm
  • XxK-Wyle

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    NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!

    No they can't break up! Rylen is here! he needs both of his daddys!!!

    *cries* noooooooooooooooo they need to be together!

    PLEASE write more soon!
    January 8th, 2008 at 06:43am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    YAY i get a dedication =]
    Rylen sounds so cute!
    =]:
    I can't wait for more
    January 4th, 2008 at 11:25am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    that was a long update!
    YAY

    *giggle*

    awh no sex??

    that sucks!!!!! whens the wedding whens the wedding??????????????????/

    more please?
    January 3rd, 2008 at 02:21am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    AWH!
    they're getting married!

    YAY

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHH

    *giggles*

    that was sooo cute!

    please write more!

    edit: page claim! *giggles*
    January 2nd, 2008 at 03:54am
  • XaccidentalXkissesX

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    I loved it... He proposed! YAY-ness! of course, he'll have to make a real proposal...
    December 31st, 2007 at 12:16pm
  • Sweet Denial

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    Hey cool, figured out how to comment! Go me! So okay, what to say without sounding too harsh? I like the story thus far, I really do, but still seems to need more depth. Feels like you're throwing in issues, personality 360's, and dare I say it sex, haphazardly. There doesn't seem to be much backplotting, which kinda detracts from the overall effect. I really do like it though, you have some quality talent here. I'll watch you for updates here, though now I go to comment on Dysfunctional.
    December 30th, 2007 at 11:47am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    *giggles* I got a dedication! YAY

    and yeah, I read very fast...

    I love how my chapter was like... nothing but lovey mush an sex. =]

    *giggles* I love it! more soon?
    December 26th, 2007 at 07:55am
  • inactive;

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    Have I told you how sweet they are? I guess I haven't.
    God, they're sweet and I fell in love with Alex. Damn! Why did he have to be gay?
    Anyway, UPDATE MORE!
    December 26th, 2007 at 02:07am
  • The Fuck-Up

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    Lol
    Nice.
    It was cute and happy and yea like.
    Dance
    {HIM on coke (the soda)}
    :shock:
    In Love
    December 25th, 2007 at 11:27am
  • XxK-Wyle

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    ooer... that was a cool update..

    Alex sounds like such a cutie!

    more?
    December 25th, 2007 at 12:19am
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