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  • constellationoftears

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    Amazing. Please keep it going!
    October 7th, 2012 at 04:27pm
  • genocideforjenny

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    Oh wow the codes didnt work -_- Anyways, UPDAAAATE(:
    August 4th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • genocideforjenny

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    Updates. Please. They're <i> my </i> addiction.
    August 4th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • safae08

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    <3<3<3
    March 18th, 2011 at 05:02pm
  • pepper potts.

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    Your writing is amazing my sweet.
    Your descriptions of things are so vivid it really puts the story inside my head.
    I hope things get better for Adam.
    Update soon. :]
    May 31st, 2010 at 06:38am
  • chemical romantics.

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    I have to admit, the whole time I was reading this, images of Adam Gontier were flashing through my mind. That man is one of my favourites and just- ugh.

    One of my favourite things about this, is the simplistic descriptions and actions you have going on. You set the pace and tone really well, it helps the reader connect with the story that much better.

    I'm deadly serious, you have to update soon. Or I shall kill you in your sleep. /lies.
    May 31st, 2010 at 03:09am
  • silk tea.

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    Adam Gontier. *drools*
    I love this.
    Your writing talent is equivalent to amazing.
    May 29th, 2010 at 05:35am
  • pepper potts.

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    Damn girl you have a natural talent for writing. You do such an amazing job.
    I just wanted to hug Adam; so sad.
    I can't wait for an update. :)
    May 23rd, 2010 at 07:04am
  • chemical romantics.

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    I love this already.

    Jeez, I'm going to enjoy this a lot.
    Write more?

    I love the theme of "old Adam" you set up here.
    The story of Naomi intrigues me, I'd like updates. :)

    I'm subscribing.
    May 23rd, 2010 at 12:46am
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