Your writing is amazing my sweet. Your descriptions of things are so vivid it really puts the story inside my head. I hope things get better for Adam. Update soon. :]
I have to admit, the whole time I was reading this, images of Adam Gontier were flashing through my mind. That man is one of my favourites and just- ugh.
One of my favourite things about this, is the simplistic descriptions and actions you have going on. You set the pace and tone really well, it helps the reader connect with the story that much better.
I'm deadly serious, you have to update soon. Or I shall kill you in your sleep. /lies.