April 25th, 2011 at 08:35am
Playing the Game of Love - Comments
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Im in love with this story! thank you for updating!April 23rd, 2011 at 03:43pm
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i really like this story!!!April 21st, 2011 at 08:43pm
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UPDATE THIS STORY!!!! and if u dont, i will DIE!!!!!!April 18th, 2011 at 05:26pm
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So glad you update this story...i always thought they were both so cute..can't wait for more.April 18th, 2011 at 03:57pm
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Hope ya doing well..and great story(:September 14th, 2010 at 04:52am
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Omg!!! You updated. ..yay! Hope the next ones soon (:September 10th, 2010 at 04:28am
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I miss this story Hun...hope all is well update soonAugust 30th, 2010 at 04:23am
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Omg!!! Milan should just dump brittany >__<.....but another amazing chapter(:!! Hope to see another update soon <3August 11th, 2010 at 08:44pm
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Why can't Milan just dump Brittany? Life would be much simpler then.August 11th, 2010 at 07:03pm
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great update...i love this story...and i would vote for a Sidney story...August 2nd, 2010 at 08:17pm
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Yay...you updated !!!!!
I love ur story..I hope
You update soon (:..ohh
And Sidney <3August 2nd, 2010 at 08:26am -
I love this story!! :)
You should do Sidney Crosby story! :)August 2nd, 2010 at 05:36am -
Amazing update the story just keeps getting better and better :)..hope you update soon!!!July 21st, 2010 at 06:49am
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awesome update...i cant wait to see what happens i am really loving this story..i'm sad we won't get a update till august but have fun on vacation..looking forward to the next update hun!!July 20th, 2010 at 08:08pm
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Omg!!! AMAZING update!!!! ....I can't wait to find out wat happens next (I'm addicted to ur story lol) :)July 16th, 2010 at 11:24am
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I can't wait to know what happens next!! This story is so exiting!!July 15th, 2010 at 02:17pm
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Great story girl can't wait to see what happens since his gf walked in ...... Update soonJuly 15th, 2010 at 09:33am
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I just started reading your story.....n I LOVE it!!!! Hope an update comes really soon :)July 12th, 2010 at 06:52am
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i love the drama! i hope this brittnay character gets whats coming to her soon! great chapter! :DJune 23rd, 2010 at 05:50pm
I love this story! it has a really good plot and I love the characters(: please don't stop writing and updating! This has to be one of my favorite stories on here.
Just a note though,
When writing dialogue, you write like this:
He smiled and said
“Hey, nice party your dad set up this year.”
Although this is readable (obviously, since I got through all amazing 17 chapters!) it's not correct structurally.
it should be:
He smiled and said, “Hey, nice party your dad set up this year.”
without the space in between, rather a comma to lead into the dialogue. This is just a note for future writing purposes. It helps distinguish who is talking and doesn't make it so confusing!
Update soon!
L