great chapter:) p.s. just a heads up so nothing happens to your story, I would fix the lower case I's in this chapter(ch.19) since you asked in your last chapter for things like that, there yah go:)
this rocked :) i went to a funeral today, and this sort of cheered me up :) it's friday night here too..aussie? hehe. the only thing (well, most annoying thing) about aus is cd release dates :P
Totally LOVE IT! The story is so amazing and Oli and Amelia are getting close, slowly, very slowly ;D Haha. So Brian has the hots for Amelia and Tom does too. Damn she's getting cosy, Great story =D
OOOOOOOOOOOH. Brain sounds like a cutie pie (: i wonder what he looks like, is there a picture of him in the characters page ? i'll check again later haha, i don't remember.
but oh man, when Oli asked if she needed a ride, he was SO not kidding. i bet he just said he was kinding because of her reaction ;o anyways, i like this !