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  • EverRose

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    I love the title. Very original.

    I think I read this about 5 times, and I still don't qiuet get it XD
    But that's good. Just means I get to mae up my own conclusion. I liked it.
    August 31st, 2010 at 02:30am
  • tiffany danielle

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    I adorded this. (:
    Good Job.
    June 17th, 2010 at 02:23am
  • southpaw

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    This was cute and funny. I love how Ryan's just like "whatever" and Brendon's just going on about it. It made me smile and I really kind of love your writing style. :)
    June 12th, 2010 at 03:58am
  • sarahinthesky

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    That was heaps cute (:
    June 6th, 2010 at 03:38am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    "And after a minute, the older boy does wishes he was there, but he stops himself."

    I think you mean "does wish" and not "does wishes."

    Amazing--and adorable--story.
    May 31st, 2010 at 12:48am
  • paranoid android.

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    Nonsense; I love it!
    And I love that it's set so late<3
    May 30th, 2010 at 08:12pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    I love stories at two in the morning - writing and reading them (:
    This was brilliant <3
    May 30th, 2010 at 11:04am
  • stencil heart.

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    Fantabulous, as always.
    Two in the morning stories are the best.
    You know... my mother was a piece of the sun before she was my mom.
    May 24th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • Lithium.

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    Hahaha, this was so random, yet I loved it.
    Thanks for suggesting it to me via my journal. :]
    May 23rd, 2010 at 07:25am
  • cosmonaut-

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    Whoa. I hate that you're such a great writer.
    I loved it :3
    May 23rd, 2010 at 12:03am
  • Keep Running.

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    I am in love with this :D It's just so... nonsensical. Amazing.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • mosquito.

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    So...random.
    I love it.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 08:40pm
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