Does deformed stick figures count? You know stick figures are sending a bad example to the youth cause all of them have eating disorders. Why can't there be a fat stick figure huh? Are they hating on the fluff? And i would LOVE character pics! Also happy birthday! Still can't believe you are older than me. -pout-
Loved the update! Poor Bryan! I really hope that that guy (lets name him Chad lol) doesn't take Bryan away! ): that would make me sad.... update soon though! :D <3Haylee
Snupid vampire is trying to hurt BryBry! Haha the vampire is going to get jumped by everyone. My friend was reading this and was like Nat is a cock blocker. Always interrupting the two boys when they try and get it on like Donkey Kong.
Ahh brybry is so freaking cute! I wish i knew him in real life cause then we could be ninja buddies! XD I'm singing with happiness that you have this story on mibba. Now i can scream at you to update in both quizilla AND mibba! XD
Hmm, I'm on chapter 3. ^_- lets see the idea so far is good, but I think your revealing to much int the story. Example: Byran's story, immediately I presumed he was an important character, right? The thing is you learn about the characters gradually, little by little, especially in a novel length story. Saying it straight out is awkward in a story, I would know I have that problem too, Haha, but that's why I'm telling you. Sorry rambling, anyway continue with the good ideas, and of course I'll keep reading.
Okay, this chapter is offically my favorite chapter in the story!!! I was sitting in the living room reading this on my laptop, and my mom was sitting next to me in the chair, and while I was reading it I couldn't help but squeal and jump in my seat. My mom just sat there giving me looks that said 'what-the-fuck-is-wrong-with-you?' and 'I-swear-to-god-your-not-my-kid' [x lmfao. But I absolutly love this story!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!! Update again REALLY FUCKING SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3Haylee P.S. If you didn't notice already, I changed my user name from RainbowSkittles1551 to RAWR!cuzIMAdinosaur!
OMFG!!!!! I really hope that Eli and Brybry get together!!!! I'm soooo excitedto find out what happens next!!! Update again realllllllly soon!!!!!!! Please??? <3Haylee