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  • lilmisshy16

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    Omg i totally agree that was a good place to stop it i love/ hate cliffhangers but they keep the story interesting. lol. La La Loves it. *singsong voice*
    September 26th, 2010 at 04:13am
  • lilmisshy16

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    Love this story. Can't get enough.
    September 25th, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • AlmostLovelyDisaster

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    She talked! Wow poor Matty I like Kaden though haha ^^
    September 25th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • SmurfGirl

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    awesome! Im soooo glad she talked!
    September 25th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • mufasa

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    its sooo goodd update now
    September 24th, 2010 at 05:00am
  • lilmisshy16

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    Ahh.... No....! Why !?! I'm dieing to know what happens.
    September 24th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • SmurfGirl

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    *smirks* i bet u anything Maria is Matty's mom! *boucing up and down* Tell me im right! anyway love the update. im so glad Kaden is alive, i knew u wouldn't kill him off. I can't help but wonder how he got out alive? *thinks hard*
    August 3rd, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • Night Writer

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    <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 x 1000000000!!!! (Is that enough love for ya?)

    I am so happy that he is alive and that they are back together!! Ugh, Kaden, kidnap me too!! Please??
    August 3rd, 2010 at 04:16pm
  • SapphirexFlames

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    My god I hate her dad so much! But it was a great update, I want to know what happens next so baddly! UPDATE QUICK!!!!!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 11:45pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    man i really really hate Matty's dad! great update i can't wait for the next one.
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:59pm
  • Night Writer

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    All I know is Kaden/Ghost better be ok!!!

    Loved the update darling :) Thank you for putting it up so quickly. As always, your writing is impeccable. You manage to make me feel what the characters are feeling and that's not easy to do. A+++ :)
    July 31st, 2010 at 06:35am
  • SmurfGirl

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    man i hate Matty's dad....
    July 31st, 2010 at 01:19am
  • colour me perfect.

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    First of all, I am so incredibely sorry I haven't been commenting lately. Things have been so hectic that I've literally had all of half an hour on the computer each night.

    But anyway, this story just keeps getting better and better! Your writing is flawless, and I love how you're being realistic about their relationship progress, it honestly pisses me off when things go so quickly. I love the characters, but I would definately like to see more of Kaden and what he's thinking!

    Wait... that is, if Kaden is alive. Damn it, he better be! I think I'm becoming attached to that guy :)

    Love it! I can't wait for more; you're doing an incredible job!
    July 30th, 2010 at 09:36am
  • Night Writer

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    NOOOOO!!! You can't just leave it at that! Poor Kaden- he better be alive or else lol

    Amazing update doll. I love the picture scene and the insight it provided. I can't wait to find out more about Kaden....I think I have a little Stockholm Syndrome myself (and I haven't even been kidnapped xD)
    July 30th, 2010 at 04:57am
  • SmurfGirl

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    I am so with Night Writer on this. U have an amazing writing style.
    July 29th, 2010 at 08:02pm
  • Night Writer

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    Amazing!!! I love your style of writing. Kaden and Matty's personalities fit perfectly together.

    Definitely one of my favorite stories on Mibba.
    July 28th, 2010 at 03:40pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    wow! that's all i can say. I am really loving where this is going. I can't believe that Kaden is the good guy! Anyway im glad to have u back and writing agian. I missed u very much, but i understand why it took u so long to come back.
    July 28th, 2010 at 12:20am
  • SmurfGirl

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    lol, i had ment car the last time. i just realized i misspelled it. hahaha im such a dork. anyway i love the new chap.
    June 22nd, 2010 at 07:10pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    i want Kaden's care too! it's awsome looking. =) And how on earth can u make the p.o.v. change so smooth. i've always had issues with that. lol
    June 21st, 2010 at 08:10pm
  • colour me perfect.

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    Amazing Amazing Amazing! I'm really loving this story, and the last few chapters have been as incredible as the first!

    I'm really enjoying the POV switches, it's really smooth and very interesting, as it shows you what both of them are thinking. I'm loving Kaden; he's definately not your average kidnapper, but it really is entertaining the way he just doesn't seem to give a damn.

    Your writing is very good, and I love where this story is going! I can't wait to see how things turn out!
    June 21st, 2010 at 09:35am