Rosabelle Cullen's Life in the Volturi - Comments

Prequel: 7,9- told not tolled. 10- Carmen not Carmon. Sequel: 1- OMG FUZZY SLIPPERS IN THE THRONE ROOM! XD "Good morning Aro." Aw that's so cute! And normal! 5-wrap, not rap 6-warm, not worm 7-does, not dose. PLEASE for the love of cheesecake, EDIT THIS THING! 8-straight, not strait. Which is IN the chapter title! Peas, not pees. The definition of "pees" is to urinate. -.-"" Emergency, not "emerging!" It's wheelchair, not weal chair. I'm DYING HERE. Cute ending...although I'm not sure sure it works with the plot you had going once Belle finally got home. Good names, by the way. I love how even though she got less attention from her mother in the beginning, she wasn't unloved. I was a bit worried about that. Love the Daddy's girl thing.

The sequel is great and the plot is wonderful, but the grammar isn't far from atrocious. The prequel was wonderful and there were literally no, spelling or grammar mistakes! But this story has at least three mistakes on every chapter! What happened? :(

I liked this story so much I just might read it again. I can't believe Belle&Alec and Nessie&Jake are getting married AND having a double wedding!!! They're such a cute copple.

Thats pretty cool, but you should read this
Dark Angel
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Carlisle's True Story

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Lol, I just noticed you DID finish the story. OH WELL!
But anyways, it was AH-mazing!!!!

Im only on chapter 10 cuz my mom is telling me to log off but this story is AH-mazing! Please please PLEASEEEE update! And fast! Thanksies! xDD
-Yiana♥

Loved it :)
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I love your story, and I think the way you wrapped things up was wonderful. I just wanted to say congrats!

:( it's the end...i hope you make a sequel:)

I take it that your not going to do a prequel or whatever?!, it's such a GOOD story!

Loved it!
More soon please
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This Is Amazing:) Keep On Writing! And I Loved How The Background If Hayley Williams:)

hey! just read chap 9!!!!
i looovvee it!
i hope she stays there tbh. n like falls in love wiv a vamp there! omg that would be great and different!!!!!!!!!!

i hope you update soon

gothicbethx

Do not believe I've commented. Bad me.
GREAT story you've got going!!
I like how you've given 'Belle a voice of her own.

Wooooo, i mean oh no, he grabbed her tongue!! :L update soon please?!

Oh dear, she got caught, oh no!!

love it

Ok so today I wanted to know what power Alec had. It clawed at me all day, and I finally searched it and he has the power to knock out one of your senses or something like that. I am content now.

I love this story. But I also like the old layout. Oh well UPDATE SOON

Ok so today I wanted to know what power Alec had. It clawed at me all day, and I finally searched it and he has the power to knock out one of your senses or something like that. I am content now.

I love this story. But I also like the old layout. Oh well UPDATE SOON