I Am a Wild Light - Comments

NOT saying it was bad. definately NOT SAYING THAT.. but i didnt get it. and now i feel stupid.

'It wasn’t very polite to stare at him as openly as I did. But it was my day of doing things in an out-of-ordinary way, so I kept my attention fixed on him'
I love the way you describe things! I could imagine everything so well which is really good.
:)
Also I enjoyed the story line
Um I can't really thing of anything bad sorry

Awsome. A little weird to me, but awsome all the same

Oh wow.
I... I... I don't even know what to say.
Really.
This was absolutely breathtaking the way you've written this.
Which was only one word to describe it.
Beautiful.
Going off of what Rhea said, yes, I agree with the maturity level of this story. Usually it's written with a immature person's point of view, which does sometimes agree with the way it's written, but this time, the maturity level fit this story.
Overall, you did an fantastic job.
You definitely deserve a lot of credit for this.
Good luck!<3
xo

Okay let me start off with this. WOW! I'm almost left speechless at this story. It's insane how the maturity level for this story is so high. The story was so mature and it had me kept from begging to end. I was so very interested to find out what was going to happen next. There was a very nice mystery and secrecy to the story and I enjoyed that aspect so very much. I think that the story was honestly great. It was so amazingly written and the detail was fabulous. I really enjoyed reading it. I think that the way it ended was also great and once again the mystery still remained. Where the quote was placed, I really liked that. I thought it was a great placement for the quote. I also liked the fact that there was more of a monologue then anything. So I'd like to say Amazing job and best of luck in the contest!