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  • heavyn

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    I loved this. Yes, it was sad but It was something that happens everyday and something that has happened to a few people I know. What I mean is mental and physical abuse by a boyfriend.

    I almost want to read another one shot about the same girl breaking up with the boy...Consider it?
    August 16th, 2010 at 08:10am
  • Ferb Fletcher

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    This was very sad. That guy is such an asshole. Oh my God, if I could come into this oneshot, I would so kick his ass!
    But yeah, very well written, I really enjoyed it :)
    May 24th, 2010 at 04:24am
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