You're Just Delusional - Comments

Title fit with the story well.
Cute layout(;

This was adorable!
The layout kind of killed my eyes but that's okay :)
I liked the situation, it seemed to go by pretty fast but I thought it was a cute scenario that you played out well. I'm not a hockey fan so I didn't know who Mike was but I thought you established his character very well. I was unsure as to what she did for a living though, I know it said but I didn't quite understand what it was. But I know that this was very sweet. <3

I read this, and I was… pretty confused, to be honest. You never said anywhere in the actual story what the guy's name was, you just started calling him Mike out of the blue. And same goes for what he did for a living - you didn't even say he played hockey, only that he was a "pro player." Don't assume that the readers know everything, some things need to be spelled out a little better.

adorable.
Good luck!