Learning to Love June - Comments

So this isn't going to be done superbly uplifting comment like i would prefer to leave, but it being 330 in the morning, me doing this on my phone, and my thoughts being on the utterly ridiculous noises my soon is making in his bassinet beside me, I'm a bit distracted to say the least, so bare with me.

I love everything about this, from the concept, to the characters, down to the writing style. the personalities stayed true throughout, something most authors, myself included, seem to struggle with. I also enjoyed the different relationships June held with everyone and the way you built on that. My only real critique would be the errors throughout, which were a little distracting to me as i went along. Beyond that, i loved this!

(Chapter 17) "I sat there long after her began the long walk home," <-- he?

(Chapter 19, authors note:) "Isn’t that sad? That I’s over?"

Sorry for all the correction notes. I just feel like people should know so the story can be the best it can be and blahblah awkward sentimental feelings for strangers.
The story really was lovely, and I'm very glad that I read it, probably more glad that you wrote it. :)

(Chapter 2) "My nose isn’t as cute as her mine slopes down like a ski hill and turns up at the end."

(Chapter 3) "If you strain your ears you can hear birds inging in the distance"
"knowing Becky will meet me there if she really wants too." <-- should be "to"

(Chapter 4) "And honestly it wasn’t even a good couple name, but it was there’s." <-- "theirs"
"And then I realize that this is the closets I’ve ever stood to Jeffery" <-- "closest"

(Chapter 6) “I just… didn’t expect you too,” <-- "to"

Prediction as of chapter 12: Becky is either secretly best friends/hooking up/in love with with Jessica or she had a past thing with Kellan

Oh gosh. I read this out of nowhere right? This seems like it's been done for a while, but I figured, all writers/authors love comments, so what's a few minutes?
This took me, like the whole day to read. And I am obsessively in love with it.
Everything about it, it was just the cutest thing in the world<3
When Jessica and Kellan kissed, my jaw dropped.
I hated Jessica from the beginning, but it was what all writers want to do- make the readers feel something and change with the character.
I definitely liked Jessica by the end.
Becky and Jessica, I think I'm just really slow and everything; it was unexpected to me. xD
Aaah, I'll end this rant.
I loved it.<3

I knew Becky and Jessica were lesbian! I just knew ti!

That totally just blew my mind. Like, you don't understand. Such a good story. I loved it.
You really have talent. Gahhh, I wish it didn't have to end because it was just so good.

Kellan was adorable and June was so real...and Jessica was too. I could fit a person that I know to each character.
Great, great job!

So, I just read all of this. Like everyone else, I did adore it. The characters are very complex, you're right, but that's what makes them realistic. Kellan was adorable, June was adorable, the whole thing was just lovely.

However, it sort of seems to me like by the end, you just wanted the story over and done with. That's fine, and I can understand, but it makes it seem a little... rushed. Still, though, I loved it, and I'm now on my way to read everything else you have on here. (:

I loved the ending, loved it!

Amazing story :D

i found this one day and thought it sounded interesting... i finished it one day! it's an amazing story! i'm happy jessica's happy in the end, and june,... and everyone! amazing detail and plot build up! can't wait to read your other stories :] <3

I finally read all LTLJ and I LOVE it!!! really! I only am a little sad because it's finished... XDXDXD

It was AMAZING. You didn't drago on, 19 chapters and it the pages turned before my eyes inti something amazingly beautiful. Your an amazing writer, I'll have to use your writing for inspiration.

Hm... I find it a little hard to top that last comment. ^ But anyways, the ending was.... AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING!!! I swear it seemed like it was something that I would read out of a real book, in fact, this whole story was! Really. You are destined to become a professional writer someday, I just know it! Aw, the finale included her apologizing to Becky, which I liked because it shows that they are friends again, and her making up with Kellan. I especially loved that second one, and I knew Kellan was going to say that, seeing as I mentioned that in the last comment, that he wouldn't see why she was apologizing. ;) But June was just worried, and I get her, so I don't really blame her for thinking that. But I'm glad Kellan said that because it showed that he wasn't mad at her at all, even if he didn't have a reason to be.
Overall, this story was amazing, and like I said earlier... definitely book worthy. This is probably like the only story I've read that is actually that good on Mibba entirely. Hm.. well, this might not be the only story, but it is definitely one of a few. :) So this story is unique, and amazing, and... you should feel special. lol. Really, I can't express how amazing this story was. So, amazing ending, and I'm going to miss reading this story. But I respect your choice of leaving it at that, because if I were in your position I wouldn't know how to really continue it either. Even though the story is over, I'm going to stay subscribed. Why? Because that's how amazing this story was, and later on with Mibba I want to remember it. :D
Probably one of the longest comments ever, but it was well needed. This story deserves a final long cmment for its' amazingness! lol. :D
One of your loyal readers who will never forget this story,
Jenna :)

My awesome comment, totally not awesome anymore. lol. I think I spelled some words wrong, but I was thinking it'd be nicer to a hand write something than a flimsy comment ya' know? And plus, I love writing in marker. I hoppe you can read that!

really sweet ending for a really great story!! keep writing!!

awww :O
it's over :(
loved the story, you're a great writer :)

This was a really beautiful story, love.
<3

omg, aww i love the ending :D
i'm so sad that it's over.

You have no idea how much I loveee this storyyy!!
Just sayin' that I'm a little sad for it to be over.. But that was a truly a great way to end your story! :D
I really had fun reading about June, and the things she thought she knew but in the end never actually did.
Haha, I can't wait for your next story idea to appear on mibba!
:)♥

I absolutly love this!
I just put off all my homework because this story was just so interesting, I wanted to read it.
And im uber happy I did because it was worth it.
Thank you for writing such a great story.

I LOVE IT.
Omg, I loved the ending. :)
But I'm so sad it's over. I mean, I was completely in love with this story. Kellan and June are so...perfect. XD And Jessica and Becky are too.
I love your take on everything-the way no one's perfect, the way love affects a girl, love.
Just, it made my happy. :)
I cannot WAIT for your new stories.