May 28th, 2010 at 05:41am
Let Go Of All You Know - Comments
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I must admit I wasn't too sure about this at first, but wow, you've done a great job developing the storyline and characters. Now I'm hooked and can't wait for more!May 27th, 2010 at 06:59pm
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I love it :) can't wait for the next update.May 27th, 2010 at 04:37pm
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something about shadows is bugging me
idk what yet, but when i figure it out i'll get back to you
update soon plz :]May 27th, 2010 at 05:38am -
amazing chapter, loved it!
can't wait for more!May 27th, 2010 at 04:22am -
OMJ i love it i love it i love it!!!! take your time this story seems like it's going to need a lot of time and thought put into it!May 27th, 2010 at 02:16am
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Amazingest story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really hope you update soon, it's driving me crazy having to wait.May 27th, 2010 at 02:03am
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:) Ok I reeaaaallllly love this so far!! More soon?
p.s My name's Kellie :DMay 27th, 2010 at 02:02am -
Chapter 1: Damn...that was pretty intense!May 27th, 2010 at 01:13am
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maaaaatttt...
*swoons*
anyway! loved it. stick to your guns Kellie!May 26th, 2010 at 11:16pm -
i luv this!! you shud have more jimmy though, hes adorable. long live the rev.May 26th, 2010 at 10:49pm
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nice update. I am really intrigued to figure out what the guys do...are they in the mob? hmm...only time will tell.
I thought it was so funny how Matt was trying to have a nice conversation with her and she was so scared that they couldn't. haha. and how he was all 'am I really that scary?'
so they hand pick the girls that come to the mansion...in that case, it must be Zacky or Matt that chose her, they are the two that have shown the most intrest in her. And I am wondering why she is special and all the guys are treating her differently. and Why was Brian being all cryptic...I have a lot to ponder on until the next update.
oh, and I love the relationship that Zacky and Kellie has. It is so cute how they are like brother and sister. :D
Can't wait for the next update.May 26th, 2010 at 08:22pm -
YOU MAKE ME HAPPY DOWN SOUTH!!! baahaha =D
*Loved* the interaction with her and Matt.... mmm id love him to control me haha
Good job girlie
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I'm really enjoying it so far, so congrats on the good writing.May 26th, 2010 at 07:39pm
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more please !May 26th, 2010 at 07:36pm
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This is so good! I cant wait for more!!May 26th, 2010 at 12:55am
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awesome
update more and soon
pleaze =D=D=D=DMay 26th, 2010 at 12:30am -
awesome
update more and soon
pleaze =D=D=D=DMay 26th, 2010 at 12:30am -
I usually hate stories like this, but just this story turned that around completely! i loved the first chapter, can't wait for the next! :DMay 26th, 2010 at 12:22am
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: DMay 25th, 2010 at 10:58pm
Please update it soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?