Summer Love - Comments

ohmylanta, that was amazing :) just saying.

Aww. :3
That was cute! I don't know how I would react if I ran into a dude six years later and he was a famous NHL hockey player. I'd prolly be kicking myself in the ass.

loved the story, the idea... but lots of mistakes... but for that, I really really loved it!

~moose~

Hey I loved the story. It was really cute, and I'm not just saying that because my name is Taryn too (although that fact kinda made me like it more). It was really good. I hope you win!!

I don't know why, but I never thought you'd do a Sidney Crosby story - I guess that's just what happens with these one shot contests.

That was very sweet. It's fun to stop for a moment and imagine - what if you could run into your childhood sweetheart again. WHat if he still loved you. What if he still made your heart beat faster and you did the same to him.

Good Luck - Hope you win.

I agree with the earlier comment, I like it as a condensed one-shot but it could have also been turned into a cute short story. But, I think with all the factors of a one-shot taken into consideration the story flows well and is kept short and sweet.
It was nice to have a glimpse into the past to see earlier development and then read more present times and how the characters had since developed and how they felt for one another.
Cute!

Awh. That was cute!
Best of luck ;)

This is another good one that you've pumped out, although i would love to see this continued in a chapter story, i do understand that this is a one-shot, and a very good one-shot at that....keep up the great work ^^

:) this is soooo cute!!!!!!
I love your writing, LOL.

Awww....cute! It's nice to know that neither one of them forgot about each other in tough times. And Sid having sex at the age of 16=awkward. But him having sex now is awkward...he's just an awkward dude...ANYWAYS, I really liked it :)