Gah! It's the end! And it's not even a happy ending! Everything's so up in the air! No! Hurry up and write, chick!
Chelle was right...if he didn't want to hurt her, he shouldn't be thinking about other girls, that's all there is too it. But, you have a master plan and I guess we'll wait!
Wow...Brian's thrown me for a loop--first for thinking that he can't be true to Chelle when they're out on the road and then the whole bathroom scene. What the hell is going on, woman? Please let us know! <3
That would have to have been the ultimate cliffhanger if there ever was one. Heh, the updates were amazing though. Brian, what a silly boy he's being. It kind of saddens me that this is coming to an end, even though you mentioned there being a sequel of sorts. I'm kind of anxious to see where the story goes from here.