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  • crazy.beautiful

    crazy.beautiful (100)

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    I like reading 2nd gen. stories, 'cause as the writer, you've free reign over them, they were left with wide open futures.

    I like your take on Scorpius, and how both sets of parents don't approve of the match, except for Hermione 'cause she totally would be the only one to do so, or so I think.

    I also like that it was just a small blurb of their life, it wasn't a whole drawn out story of the four years they've been together, if anything already happened, you reverted to it in a way that flowed with the current fluidity of Scorp's thoughts.

    Well done!
    July 11th, 2010 at 06:14pm
  • Geek In The Pink

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    aww that was cute :P
    June 3rd, 2010 at 02:56pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    So this was a rather sweet story. I really liked it.
    May 25th, 2010 at 12:21am