a maxi poo this is so good. im so proud!! :_) your ideas are very well organized. its never really overwhelming to read. keep working! I defiantly see good things coming to pass. :)
I love it. I love you. It was absolutely fabulous. Publishing potential, Max! PUBLISHING POTENTIAL!!! I cant wait to see how we get from where we are to what the prologue talks about. But so far you nailed an amazing start that is very descriptive and will keep the reader interested!