Woha! I just read this story and "Please Save My Soul" and I love them! *subscribes* What I need now is a chap in Frank's POV... Or just the old Frankie back ^^ update soon? 0=D
I'm not gonna lie, I really wanted Gerard to slap Frankie so hard on the last chapter. In my mind, this is how it would've went down: Gerard slapped Frank, took his insults, maybe thrown a few back at him, and stayed by his side.
Am I insane for wanting that to happen? xD But I really, really enjoy this story. <3
Frank has fallen over the edge, but I think if he asked Gee not to just leave him there, that Gee should have at least stayed with him a while. I feel bad that he just left him alone.
Hey Gee, remember back when I went crazy and youstayed by me strung me up and starved me for my own good then went home so you didn't have to listen to me insult you?
'Kay, yeah, I know Frank is being a freak and hurting Gee, but Gee loves Frank and knows he's obviously got reasons because little Frankie would never be like that so he should suck it up and figure it out.
Buuuut he didn't. His feelings got hurt so he wanted to leave. Oh well. Maybe next time.
Aaaand I love the chapter even if my comment doesn't seem like it so far lol <3 I kind of get on a roll when I start thinking 'out loud'.
The fact that his feelings got hurt and he left does add drama to the story and I thought the parting sentence where he talked quiet even though Frank was yelling at him was cool. Or another word that means good. Poignant? Sweet? Romantic? Something of all those words blended together.
I think it's an intriguing twist that Gerard has Frank chained up in a basement and Frank wants to kill him, by the way xD
Damn, poor Gee ):! Frankie is such an ass!!! In a way I'm happy he's chained up. And in another I'm not... But it's for the best anyways. Let's hope it works out :D! update soon (:!!
Aww this chapter made me feel so sorry for Gerard, it's sad to think he's doing all this to help Frankie, and all he does is upset him back! :( Update soon please!
I despise this Frankie! I vote we kill him! Because I have no patients to forgive him, i don't forgive easily, and this is just un-forgivable, and i realized, that i may have said i hated Gerard in the story before this, but that's not true, i was just thinking like frank, and now that i'm thinking like Gerard, and looking at Frank's perspective... I'm very sorry to Gerard and i'm kicking frank's ass... then killing him, because he's just being an annoying dick face.....
noooo! dont lose inspiration D:!! and i cant believe Frankie O_O...he is definitely different thats for sure O_O... it kinda scares me D:! i hope he gets back to the old Frankie in time D:!!
I really love this story, as well as the other one! I just think you need more of a.....twist. Like...Gerard falling in love with Jeremy or something like that, you know? Something that people would not expect. Maybe Mikey will die. -hint hint- ;)
uh! Frankie! *bitch slaps him* fucking ass hole... just kill him! grrr..... *hugs Gerard* poor baby Gee... *rocks back and forth holding Gerard* I'm going to kill Frank... I seriously am.... this is beyond hate! After everything! He says that to Gerard... it's almost unforgivable... it possibly might be, it depends on my mood.... grrr.... I'm going to kill Frank... he's not even worth calling Frankie... I can't believe I actually cared for him in the other story... how stupid was i?!
:o! yay!! Frankie is alive and back :DD!!! he seems sorta the same with the giggling and what not :p! i cant wait for the next update :D!!!!!!!!!! i shall subscribe x]!
Cute chapter. Mikey <3