I honestly love this. Most of the time, I'm stuck to fantasy stories with magic and myths, but this story seems to have some sort of pull over me. Zuri is someone I can relate to because I don't really have a dad. (I haven't seen the creep sine I was 3; close to 7 years ago). I love how you ended it. Hi, I'm Zuri. Welcome to my life. It's something you would expect to find at the beginning, not at the end. It gives the story a personal touch. Please continue writing, because I wish to learn more about Zuri and her life.