Life of a Tainted Soul - Comments

  • Rose Fairy

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    I'm in total agreement with Moon Beams. This story is simply fantasti! Please continue on! ^_^
    June 4th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • behindbrowneyes03

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    this is the first feedback i've gotten on a story
    i'm almost in tears =D
    thank yu so much&& i'll def continue
    May 26th, 2010 at 12:11am
  • Moon Beams

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    I honestly love this. Most of the time, I'm stuck to fantasy stories with magic and myths, but this story seems to have some sort of pull over me. Zuri is someone I can relate to because I don't really have a dad. (I haven't seen the creep sine I was 3; close to 7 years ago). I love how you ended it.
    Hi, I'm Zuri. Welcome to my life. It's something you would expect to find at the beginning, not at the end. It gives the story a personal touch. Please continue writing, because I wish to learn more about Zuri and her life.
    May 25th, 2010 at 06:14am