Teeth Bleed Red - Comments

this was so good. . i love gerard, and my heart always go for him. you write this so well. . you captured me! you do amaze me.

Wow! That was so sad but so amazing. I so hope that Lyn-z is as perfect for him as she is in this, but knowning Gerard he wouldn't settle for anything less. That was so incredibly good.

brilliant
thanks a lot
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amazing on so many levels.
the beauty of the writing style combined with the actual point of it was completely gorgeous.
there's nothing negative i could possibly think to say about this.

Wow. This is amazing Isa. I love your style of writing so much.

MCRLUCY:

Whether this is about Gee and Lyn-Z or not; it's still a fantastically written piece. You've put into to words what any woman would feel if her man was being victimised or bullied. I love it. I'm happy as long as Gerard and Lyn-Z are happy. They seem totally in to eachother and that can only be a good thing!

i don't know what to write so i'm quoting instead!
but this is awesome!!

Whether this is about Gee and Lyn-Z or not; it's still a fantastically written piece. You've put into to words what any woman would feel if her man was being victimised or bullied. I love it. I'm happy as long as Gerard and Lyn-Z are happy. They seem totally in to eachother and that can only be a good thing!

Well, Isa, I have to say this story screwed my mind on a few things...I mean, not in a bad Way, though. But it just rendered to me that things won't alWays turn out how it may expect...but it'll alWays be the best. All the time. (:
Thank you, Isa. I love this story much, and I can't explain how much I love how you made it seem so realistic...it literAlly planted some small figment in my mind. I felt it was happening as I read it. Love you much.

You're amazing.

I'm not a huge fan of Lyn-Z, but I like her and respect her, and if her feelings for Gerard are
anything like you've written them in this one-shot, then I'm absolutely ecstatic he's found such true love. :]

The title && the corresponding part in the story were fucking perfect, a.k.a. this part:
" ...and bleed he did, so that his teeth was streaked with blood and his lips stained whenever
he attempted a smile. Now he is ashamed for his weakness, and tries to hide. It doesn't matter
how or where, because all they wanted was the man he used to be.

It was a pity, and maybe a punishment that they would never have that man ever again.

"I won't let them break you, any more." "

I'm so sorry for this shitty comment, but I love this to death.

:cheese:

I have this heavy feeling in my chest.
And I feel...dirty, almost.
Like it was a crime. Like they hadn't and wouldn't themselves.

Waw. It was awesome. Amazing. People are gutted about Gerard getting married (And hey! I was too) but they do take it too far, WAY too far. And you explained it amazingly. =]

[More rant...]

And it's a fact. Everyone Changes, People just don't understand it. Gerard'll always be that man, he still is I think. If Lyn-Z is who he loves then, it's who he loves. No one apart from him can change it no matter what they say, so Honestly to all those people who do talk shit about Her & Him being together, Shut it. No affense but you can't change do anything but make it worse.

[End Rant..]

So yeah, you really should write more, twas amazing tbh :)

,xoxo

Well, it's not like I have to say this, but I think I will anyway.

Isa is a brilliant writer.

[/Captain Obvious]

I don't understand why people badmouth Lyn so much. It can't make her feel any better.

...[/really pathetic comment]

You have to be one of the best authors on here.
This was simply beautiful.
It made me cry.
Seriously, you are brilliant.
Thank you for writing this.

Isa...
Thank you...
Thank you for this..
Thank you for everything..

I love you Gee.

Thank you

O_O;
Amazement. That is all I have to say. There is so much that I'm feeling right now, and most of it is guilt, because I was one of those people who blamed everything on that man.

I thank you for writing this. It put so much into perspective for me. I don't know whatever possesed me to think that he changed into a monster, because he's still the same Gerard that we all know and love. Just because he married and wants to be happy doesn't make him a bad person.

To add on to that, I love how you put things into perspective. Like how Lyn-Z knows how much hurt he's going through because of those fans. And how he's so gentle and stuff like that. You did an amazing job and now I want to write a Keep the Faith fic. :tehe:

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O_O

That blew me away, especially after getting used to Have Kids Lyn-Z.

I admit that some of it was lost on me because I don't really keep up to date with the MCR world and what random internet people are saying about Gerard or what they're accusing him of being. I mean, all you ever hear is "He's changed, he's changed" Into what? Someone who wants to settle down and feel human? Omgnothat's so horrible!!!! *rolls eyes*

But really, you brought that out fantastically. Like...that's the way a wife should feel for her husband. And I like how he's so gentle with her and treats her like she's fragile and breakable, like he doesn't realize how fragile and breakable he is himself. And I absolutely love that line near the end

"It was a pity, and maybe a punishment, that they'd never have that man again."

So...*claps* You brought out the essence of several themes: a newlywed relationship, love, Keep The Fath and marriage in general. Like, throughout the entire message of keeping the faith, you can see their marriage. Well done. =D