The Faire Folk - Comments

In the summary, except should be accept.

Just stumbled upon this at three in the morning.
I must say, this is amazing. Really, I love it. I'd love if you really did make it a longer story.
A very original idea and well written.
Great job! :)

Oooh, I liked. Made me shiver ^_^
Just a note - the layout is rather unreadable; I had to click on 'default layout' to read the story.
You had a few spelling/grammar/punctuation errors, but nothing major.
It was a good read overall!
I definitely think you should turn it into a full-fledged story when the contest is over.
Good job.