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  • alexander bernadotte

    alexander bernadotte (125)

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    This was creepy, like wow o.O It sorta reminds me of possession. Creepy as hell too!
    Now for the con-crit: This has alot of punctuation errors. If you put this into a Word document, it'll be perfect (:
    Good luck and thanks so much for entering <3
    May 29th, 2010 at 07:17am
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