It's Classy, Not Classic. - Comments

  • Frank Iero

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    for some reason, i thought the beginning of the chapter was like, a flashback.
    but i loved this, it was so well written and so descriptive. more soon?
    July 7th, 2010 at 05:14pm
  • author.anonymous

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    This story truly grabs my interest in a way that is refreshing for me....*sigh*...I do have one tiny suggestion though. It's up to you whether you use it or not.

    I love the attraction and love between Kat and Frank, however, you could possibly try to make them a tad more dynamic by allowing them to go through an entire chapter or two without having sex.

    I know it seems hypocritical from me since I like a good sex scene just as much as another person, however I have read stories where it starts to become annoying when all they're doing is rolling in the sack. It's definitely not going to be as interesting without "doing the dirty" but it will make the story more believable if she like hung out with her father or possibly got another friend! Or even if he hung out with his friends.

    Sorry to put all of this, just doing as you told me and commenting :D

    Love the story to pieces though. It is truly adorable <3

    I think I'll stop boring/ annoying you now *sheepish smile*....you definitely have a great story though, bear that in mind :D
    July 6th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • christine!

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    i read all 24 chapters today:)
    that's how fuckin hooked i am on this story!
    love it
    you deserve so many more comments!!!
    July 5th, 2010 at 08:09am
  • Frank Iero

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    fuckkk yeah i loved this! but that carrie won't go and like, lock up frank for the banging of an underaged kid...?
    July 4th, 2010 at 10:03pm
  • superamy2014

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    I really like this story, but my constructive criticism for you is to separate your writing into more paragraphs. I find it a bit hard to read when it's all squished together in just a few paragraphs for one chapter. But other than that, I'm really liking the story. :)
    July 4th, 2010 at 09:55pm
  • Frank Iero

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    this chapter was so fucking beautiful
    June 26th, 2010 at 10:41am
  • WestCoast

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    This story is so amazing, it's ridiculous! :)
    I subscribed and will undoubtedly get extremely excited when the update notification shows up in m email.
    Oh, and I love how this story is romantic but not in a 'trying too hard/nauseating way'.
    Congrats :)
    June 26th, 2010 at 09:27am
  • tryst

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    okay, so here i was, kinda sleepy and on mibba, and i see a familiar story.
    so i checked and was like 'HEY that's that story i was reading that was like amazing' (serious, completely true thought right there) and i was wondering why i didn't get an email because i'm subscribed and i noticed i wasn't signed into msn. and i felt kinda stupid.

    buut i'm done rambling.
    i can't wait to read the next chapter. cx
    this is so adorably cute!
    June 26th, 2010 at 07:35am
  • le bonheur

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    Ok so I love this. I'm a new sunscriber andrhis is honestly one of my favorite frank stories. Especially because i don't really read a lot of frank stories. So yea update soon please!
    June 21st, 2010 at 08:21am
  • tryst

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    ..can i just say oh my god.
    i just read from chapter one to twenty three, and oh my god.
    this is.. wow. i really love it. count on me commenting every new chapter, ahah.

    update soon, please! i can't wait to read more!
    June 20th, 2010 at 05:35am
  • hellodarling

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    i liked this chapter even though it was short. it was very sweet.:) i'm just glad you updated, ha.
    June 20th, 2010 at 03:22am
  • Frank Iero

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    i think this chapter was quite nice, very homely and it had such a nice setting with next to no dialouge. loved it!
    June 20th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • JessieAnn817

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    UPPPDDDAAATTTEEE?????
    June 17th, 2010 at 04:05am
  • Frank Iero

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    um, i think ive fallen in love with this story.
    June 13th, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • AngelFake

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    hehe loved it (again)xxxxxxx
    June 13th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • AngelFake

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    omg is it possible for the two of them to keep their hands off each other
    FOR FIVE FREAKIN MINUTES???
    (hehe)
    nah,i loved it:)
    June 9th, 2010 at 07:24pm
  • Zacky Baker.

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    :] That was dirty. .x]]
    loved it though
    June 8th, 2010 at 12:33pm
  • JessieAnn817

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    This is a really good story!! Love it maybe more paragraphs!
    June 7th, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • hellodarling

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    ahh, part 21 already! i love it. i literally can't wait for the next time you update.:) you, my dear, are awesome.
    June 7th, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • Space Clown

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    Thanks for updating!!!!!
    June 5th, 2010 at 07:39am