Meeting my Sexy Emo AIM Buddy! - Comments

Well..this is definitely not my type of story. I don't like the title, to be honest its kind of stupid and long, and the capitalization isn't correct. The layout is horrible, and I just think this story is really cliche. It has potential though.

The story has great potential but the layout is kind of annoying and the grammar makes me want to cry. The switching between the point of views is a little confusing. I would enjoy it more it is just not the story for me. I hope you will find room for improvement.

I would read it!!! :D I Love Scarlet and Jason. :)

Update! Please :D

please updateeee<3
i luuuh this;D

OMG
i just love your writing :)
and i really cant believe that i was included in the shout out :)
HONERED MUCH!!
keep up the great work :D

Loving Your Story Keep Up The Awsomness....Please Update Soon

Loved This Chapter <33
Keep writing ,it's so good!

you are an awesome writer, the story is very good

i freaking love this whole thing
WOOT WOOT :)

lol that was awesome! hehe!
update soon please!
- Skl

PLEASE WRITE SOON!!!!!! i absolutely love this book...

you should update the story

Thanks and umm yeah I realized my next few chapters after the first were pretty bad, so I corrected it later on. :) Thanks though!

Just as a pointer on the paragraphing? You had it pretty good in the first chapter, but in the next few, everything was all bundled together and made it harder to read. I like it though, it's cute. :3

this story's awesome!
I think you should update it :D

I love Scarlet's answer and i love Jason for loving her! I know Shane and Jen should get together! all for of the are the perfect couples!!! XD
I don't like chase, he should get with a cheerleader or something!

nice!! I just hope Scar puts
that stupid jock in his place!
^,^ hehehe
update soon please!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
lolz update soon ;p
I don't think Scarlet will like Chase the way she likes Jason
Uh oh! What if Chase is like, mega pushy and doesn't give up??? X0

UPDATE IT!!... Please?