Well, I know I'm like three years late with this comment, but I DON'T CARE! I really really enjoyed reading this! I absolutely love the way you portray Matt, and how you can really empathise with him and see what goes on inside that crazy head of his. I pretty much gasped in shock at the end of the prologue - MATT BELLAMY HATING DOM HOWARD?! WHAT?! Since you only updated this three years ago, I think it's a bit much to hope for an update any time soon... but mark my words, I will be waiting till the end of the earth, because I am desperate to find out what happens.
Well done. I've recommended this :)