In the Eyes of the Beholder - Comments

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I love this story so far and I'm excited to see what happens next. They probably have so many Order members working because they trust the Order to be fair to kids of death eaters and everyone else? Yeah that's what I'm going with lol.

This is one of my favorite stories on mibba, if not on top. This is a different fan-fiction, not like the others which lack meaning. Please continue to write ! I've just suscribed(;

When I went to go to the next page I noticed that this was the last page tell u would update and to be honnest I was sad. So please update.

AHHH!!! I love it! Let me guess, they want to make sure everything runs smoothly (they prob. want no more Tom Riddles to walk the halls) so that's why there are so many order members. Ah! Remus is back. Him and Tonks are like my favorite characters. (allong with Fred & George but who doesnt love them)
Anyways, good chapters and yay! You updated!

I don't know why you've got so many Order members as teachers...but I squealed when I saw that Molly was one of the teachers. I don't know why, but I did. :)

I still really like this. You're making it interesting and you're developing a plot that would have been likely - or at least entirely possible - if the series ever continued. That's one reason I like it so much, I guess. You're sticking to and building upon what JK did, other than keeping a few people that she killed alive for this. I grew up with Harry Potter, so I'm very excited about how you do this because you're not making the drastic changes that everyone else does. :)

Keep up the amazing work! And sorry for the random babble XD

Loving it so far. I thoroughly enjoy the fact that you've kept the story so close to the book and that your plot actually makes sense and has a deeper meaning than the regular HPCharacter-loves-random-girl-or-another-HPCharacter. I can't wait for the next chapter, especially because you took the time to research more. So yes, I'm very impressed and excited to read more! :)

are you going to update? i was just wondering because i realy like this story...

this is really good

I really like this tory so far. Its reallly creative and I think your doing a wonderful job. I can't wait for your next update.

Uh-oh...I'm now very curious as to how things will work out. Will 'Mione get to marry Ron, or will she still go through with Draco?
I will feel very, very sorry for Ron if he gets Lavender...maybe I should say I'd feel sorry for "Won-Won". LOL!

And thanks. I wouldn't call them 'relentless' reviews, or however you put it, but I do very much like your style and what you're doing with this story, and I can't wait for more!

You're still doing amazing. i love your details and how you tried to get it by that kingsley was trying to be as fair as possible and...I'll stop before i embarrass myself XD

Love it, can't wait for more!

This... seems... fudgin... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Update soon, please! :D

I really like this idea, I'm not into the Draco and Hermione but this seems really good. Update it soon.

wow! THis definantly has my attention! I truly love it so far. you discribe all the characters to a T. its one of the best hp fanfictions i have come across in a while. please continue!
-lizzybeth
btw i am currenltly writing a fan fiction as well......
(hint hint.... :D haha)

Nummy nummy virtual cookies xP
Can they be snickerdoodles?!

Anyway, I'm loving it still. And I kind of suspected it would be Draco/Hermione who were going to be forced to marry each other...or maybe it won't be forced? Hmm....
Oh, well. I eagerly await your next chapters =3

YAY FRED IS ALIVE....it was weird having one twin without the other like really weird....
anydoodles smoodles
I LOVES IT
*skittles*

I'm glad you didn't get rid of Fred and Tonks and them. I cried when JK did. Seriously.
So, I'm noticing that if no one else clicks submit before me, I'm your first comment. I'd just like to say that I like the idea very, very much and you have my interest. I kind of like how you described Hermione at the end of your second chapter...and what does Ollivander mean by 'opposites attract', hmm? xP
I'll be here next time you update!