Young Love Was Such Dumb Love - Comments

  • la dispute.

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    AND HERE WE GO! :P

    Chapter 24:
    Totally love the random lady at the bar who just started telling Benny her love story. Lol. But everything she said, I pretty much believe to be true. It's kind of sad when you think about it, though. Like, how many people dismiss young love to mean nothing. SO untrue - most of the time. Lol. And Matt, huh? I don't know how I feel about him yet. Lol.

    Chapter 25:
    "... Benny found a blonde with a huge sign that read, BENNETT FALLON & BOYFRIEND totally laughed out loud to that! :P And Max, the little shit. Like, I get that he's mad that his best friend and sister had a falling out, but she's his sister. He should be on her side! And I'm excited to read the drama that's going to happen at the party! Lol.

    Chapter 26:
    I love Melissa and Benny's friendship; they're adorable! Hahaa. And I loved that John, although it's technically not sabotaging, told a little white lie to Matt about Benny liking to be alone when she's upset. But Matt's kind of stupid for listening to that; NO GIRL WANTS TO BE ALONE WHEN SHE'S UPSET, MATT! Lmao. And gah! I want her and John back together already!

    Chapter 27:
    I felt so emotionally drained after reading! Lol. Like, I felt like I was apart of John and Benny's relationship and was just watching a trainwreck happen all over again. I hate that Benny is being so stubborn still! I understand that John broke her heart, but he's obviously more than sorry about it, and is still willing to be there for her. I like Matt, but let's face it: he's no John O'Callaghan. Lol. I can't take the heartbreak anymore! :'(

    Chapter 28:
    Okay, now I can say it without feeling bad: I hate Matt. Lol. On one hand, I can see why he just exploded: he's in love with Benny and has been trying for awhile to get her to open up to him and has had to deal with it kind of being a one-side relationship. On the other hand, he knew that she had had a shit night the night before but he decided to just go ahead and blow up on her anyway. And I just wanted to smack him for doing it. The only good this is, is that Max and Benny are all good again! YAY! Lol.

    Chapter 29:
    I loved this chapter so much! Mostly because of the flashback of her and John, being so adorably in love. Lol. I could picture them sitting in the tree and acting nervous. I loved it, boo! :)

    Chapter 30:
    Dude, I loved this chapter, too! I love your ability to make everything so realistic! Like, it really seemed like a real family Thanksgiving, including the awkwardness and less than funny jokes at times. Lol. And I'm so glad that Benny finally admitted that to herself! She doesn't love Matt because she's in love with John! PULL IT TOGETHER, BENNY! Lol.

    Chapter 31:
    "I don't want to be friends with you, I want to be in a relationship with you! Don't you get it, when you left me it was like you were cheating on me! With the rest of the world, because they got to see you and I didn't! I was jealous of everyone in New York City because they got you," John stumbled on his words ... I really kind of loved that. Lol. My heart was aching so bad for John. I loved being able to see a glimpse of them together at the end, and the fact that he wasn't mad when she said 'no', just made me love John more. Lol. BUT FUCK YES! Matt finally realized the truth and so did she! PLEASE HAVE THIS BE A HAPPY ENDING, WOMAN! Lol.

    Chapter 32:
    OH MY GOODNESS. I literally have no words for how perfect that ending was. Seriously. Everything from the moment John realized she was there to her underlining the word forever. I'm so sad that it's over (well, been over lol) because I love John and Benny's characters so much! But all good things must come to an end, I suppose. Sigh. Lol But seriously, Alaska, this was one fucking amazing story and I loved every word of it! :D

    END OF BIG ASS COMMENT. :P <3
    June 19th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    This story is so goddamn beautiful!! :))
    I read through it for like, 2 days. :D
    I loooove it so much! gaaaaaaaah...
    :DD
    nice work! :DD
    April 27th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • laceyvengeance

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    AHHH!!! It's so cute & happy! yayy!! haha yet I'm sad it's over): it was really good.(:
    April 25th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    I'M GONNA MISS JOHN AND BENNETT!!!!!1
    SDAFKJDKFLDL
    I CRIED
    I REALLY DID.`
    April 25th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • disappearing act.

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    I'm so sad it's over! I didn't want a happy ending but you changed my mind with the last few chapters. They belong together. So, I guess it's okay for them to be happy hahaha. Well done, girl!
    April 24th, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    And so it ends. :') Definitely one of the best ones I've read. They're finally back together! And now they're gonna live happily ever after! I love this so much.
    April 24th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    I'm gonna miss those kids... i love them so much. :( thanks for making it happy. =)
    April 24th, 2011 at 07:21am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    April 23rd, 2011 at 06:44am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Well it's about damn time. Bennett can finally be with John again! Ahhh I'm happy with this!
    April 20th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    i was all like "oh my god john you're a hot mess..."
    then i almost started crying cause he's so cute
    and then benny and him kissed
    aldfjalkfjaslfj
    and now matt is out of the picture.
    alkdflkjadslfk
    April 19th, 2011 at 05:06pm
  • Lucille Ball.

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    we might be on the same brain wave-length. Cause I just feel like I know to check when you update. I fucking hate Matt. I get that he's nice, but I don't want really nice... I want John - end of story.
    April 19th, 2011 at 09:06am
  • laceyvengeance

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    uhm...I agree with whilethefirewasout...Matt's just gonna push Benny away so much that she's gonna end up running back to John...or something completely unexpected is gonna happen, like everything since Benny's prom night was a dream & John never cheated & put her through the pain, but who knows except for you, the writer...who should update soon?(:
    April 17th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    kfljkldfjaskl `THAT'S CAUSE SHE LOVES JOHN!!!!
    April 17th, 2011 at 05:27am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Well eventually she's gonna tell Matt that she doesn't love him, and he's gonna make assumptions and get angry and basically send her running to John, and that's John's chance to get her back then everything's happy again! haha I love this.
    April 16th, 2011 at 07:22am
  • just breathe

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    Eh, Benny should just get back together with John.

    I seriously love this story.
    April 16th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    Yo, I hate Matt. No one should have their life that together at 20. I hate him and I'm glad she doesn't love him..... stupid MATT.
    April 16th, 2011 at 06:40am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    i am crying.
    April 14th, 2011 at 01:32am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    oh benny boo, you just can't forget about all the things John means... suck it matt.
    April 13th, 2011 at 07:35am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Benny's probably going to get back with John, but in good time. Right now she thinks it's best that she stays with Matt, but she should really be following her heart, cliche as that may sound. I liked the flashback, it was cute! I bet John is gonna eventually find a way to get her back or something, or Matt is gonna screw up again.
    April 13th, 2011 at 07:16am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    matt you're such a bitch
    and omg max and bennett.
    so sister/brotherly.
    April 11th, 2011 at 10:16pm