Awwww, cuteness!! And oh so sexy "he would mumble sweet nothings in my ear in Spanish." <--- that must be what you imagine Ray doing to you, you seem to have him do that in alot of stories ;)
Wow your good at writing these! My friend read a book, and apparently it had a 15 person Orgy in it, and the writer(A girl strangely) went to every last detail, down to how it went in. I'll find it for you if you want, but untill then, kepp writing these stories!!! I espesh liked the bit where he says Run away with me? coz i can picture it.
Fray forever!!