Oh em gee. I stumbled across your story somehow and I am hooked!! I can totally feel for Brianna...I was in a similar situation when I was in high school. Stupid Tony...boys are idiots in general. Unfortunately we need 'em to help populate the world...XD
so i kind of hate that it's taken me this long to find this story, but guess what, i'm already addicted. i just absolutely love the way you write tony in all of your millions of tony stories. it's fantastic. um, but anyway, about this one. so far it's definitely interesting. i kind of have a relationship just like this except sometimes i hate the kid more than love him (he's a pens fan, i'm a caps fan... it rarely ends well). i loved the way tony yelled at her to get her ass away from mike. silly boy thinks he has so much control. i also loved the awkwardness of him asking her out. too cute. oh freshman boys haha.
anyway, i hope you keep updating cause i think this has the makings of another epic story :D
i love this story! I want Tony to wake up and realize Bri is really the one for him, but I enjoy the drama you're creating before he gets to that point. And Mike seems absolutely adorable. Can't wait for the next update!
I just read all four chapters and LOVED IT! I want to say this though. Tony needs to get his head out of his ass and go for Bri, instead of some girl that skates around in nothing short of underwear and waves pom-poms. Uck! Then Mikey is too adorable, and I think he needs a good girl, if him and Bri don't work out, that's at least what I am going to get out of this, and be a complete gentlemen. Haha, Joey and the stress ball, classic and awesome. I love it! Update soon please please please.
Chapter 4 Comment No, I mean someone to get your mind off Tony. You need a boyfriend that can show you there are more guys out there besides Lucia." - - Wow Kara that's the high road. I say you need a boyfriend to make Tony insanely jealous! I'm evil when it comes to love. Whatever it takes.
"Take the Tony goggles off for a second and think really hard." Jess advised me - - Excellent advice!
I wanted to watch for clues that he wasn't really that fond of her, that he just thought he was, and he knew we belonged together. But the more I did it, the more I realized how delusional I sounded. - - Awww baby girl - you're killing yourself.
"Sure, you'll tell him good game when he was barely a 0 for the game while I was a +1." - - and so it begins. The green eyed monster. Jealousy, not tony, but the green eyed thing works huh?
"Oh, just friends?" He murmured, sitting up a little straighter. "Yeah, and that is all we will ever be." - - I wouldn't count on that.
"What the fuck is that?" He gestured to the couch Mike and I had been sitting on. "Why are you schmoozing all over Hoef?" - - I'm jumping up and down Woo Hooo soooo jealous.
And as I headed up the stairs, a thought occurred to me that this plan to get over Tony, might just make me fall even deeper. - - NOOOOOO!
So love this. I love that Tony is jealous. I love that Brianna is making him jealous - alls fair in love and war. I love that Mike is such a sweetheart, but I do worry he is going to get hurt. I love that I finally have a new love story to read - you write the best love stories. I love that you already have so much of this written, it means you'll update real soon, right?
I think Tony should just suck it up and get over it. If he's mad that she is looking for a guy then oh well, he needs a taste of his own meds. lol that was a little harsh but it needed to be said.
Chapter 3 Comment , he went straight to Leah before he left two hours later to go God knows where with her. I think my heart cracked when I watched him walk out the door without even an acknowledgment. - - awww I just want to give her a hug. I also want to pinch tony. A good pinch in the arm.
Over the years, all my thoughts and emotions have smashed together and built up, the pressure almost unbearable at times like this, times when I want to scream how I feel at the top of my lungs. - - Let it out Bri!!!!!
I felt Tony's hand on my back a few moments later, his fingers running along the cloth of my sweatshirt and then along the bare skin where the fabric had ridden up. - - OK I think that's a sign - touching bare skin. Good sign
e whispered, leaning down to kiss my forehead. His lips lingered for a moment passed friendship, - - Oh I like this!
Come on, you should have realized by now that the best things in life don't come easy. You have to fight. - - Oh I like her!!!
The sound of the car door opening and my seat belt unclicking made me jolt awake, eyes flashing open as Tony cautiously lifted me into his arms. "Sleep. I've got you." He whispered, his lips centimeters from mine - - Damn, I know why you love him Bri!
I squeezed my eyes shut as the lump in my throat constricted my airway. It was the way he said it with the least amount of attachment possible that made me waste another night crying over Tony. - - Awww. Good try. Damn if he didn't get it. Maybe a kiss to go along with it next time.
I'm really loving this story. And I still have another chapter to read. WOO Hooo
Chapter 2 Comment - Sorry! Part of me was wondering what was up with Tony, Kara said he wasn’t playing well, but I thought maybe it was because he was nervous to play in front of his new girlfriend. Yep. They were official. - - NO TONY!!!!
A pinch in my heart was felt as he looked at her before glancing to his right, eyes searching for me. He glanced at me and I tried to smile, but couldn’t quite force my corners up, not with the large amount of disappointment that was shoved into my chest, constricting my airway. - - Most importantly he looked for you! Tell Him You Love Him!
I silently wondered if I was still one of his top ladies now that a new girl was in the picture. - - Awww!
"Tony, you should be worried when I stop hitting on your teammates. That means I'm sleeping with them." - -Ooooo I like her! LMAO
NO way in hell I can like Leah. She can be sweet as fucking sugar and I'm not going to like her!
Can't wait till he finds out that Brianna is in love with him.
I can totally feel for Brianna...I was in a similar situation when I was in high school.
Stupid Tony...boys are idiots in general.
Unfortunately we need 'em to help populate the world...XD