I just recently found this story, and I loved it so much that I stayed up all night reading it. To say I was relieved when you posted the last chapter would be an understatement. I love your story so much, you're a really fantastic writer. :)
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. You had me worried at the beginning because Tony seemed like he was being a total douche. And he kind of was. But you totally made up for it at the end. That was honestly perfect. SEX now yes? Hahaha. Love you!
"Brianna, I wasn't trying to make you stay. I was trying to stop you so Tony could reach you." - - I want to be mad at her for not waiting to hear what he had to say, but I can’t. I would have ran too.
"He's coming here?" I squeaked, "when did that happen? When did he leave?" "Let's just say, he should be there by now." Kara insisted. - - Girl you better go put pretty underwear on!!!
"You could start with I'm sorry." I told him, dog-earing the page I was on and throwing my book to the other side of my bed. Tony's green eyes squinted a little more as he shook his head. "For what?" He asked as if he was genuinely confused. "Are you kidding me?" I breathed out, my green eyes searching his. "No." He told me blankly, blinking as he waited. "You've been breaking my heart for six years." I whispered to him, biting down on my lip, eyebrows drawing together in a painful expression. "Who's fault is that?" - - I love how this almost starts as a fight. How they know each other so well and care about each other so much that it’s not awkward and weird – it’s a spat. I think it’s adorable, and I love that Tony doesn’t cave. That he stands toe to toe with her.
"No, but I'm just wondering how you expected me to know. How the hell did you expect me to not break your heart when I thought that the girl I loved couldn't possibly love me like that?" He forced out through his teeth. "Those other girls were replacements." - - Time for the Phoebe dance!!!! I love you for this Tony. Way to put it right out there.
"I've always loved you. I'm sorry I didn't know it until how, but I do know that feelings this strong don't just happen; they develop over long periods of time. I've never felt something so strong as the love that pulls me to you." He pulled away to look at me, frowning slightly at the tears brimming. "Please don't cry." - - I swear I have goose bumps. Don’t cry Bri…Strip him naked and have your way with him. You know you want to.
Things had finally fallen into their perfect places. - - Oh yes they had and I’m a happy, happy girl!
I figured out the moral of the story. Boys are stupid, never wait for them to give you what you can just take for yourself. LOL
I love this Bri. Can’t wait to see all the love that comes after – yes I mean LOVE – but I also mean how they are together now that they’ve both confessed their feelings for each other. This was awesome. You made the moment that we have all been waiting for pretty great. :D Now you know the drill – MORE!
Woot! Pretty stinkin excited that Operation Get Tony To Tell Brianna That He Loves Her And Didn't Mean To Be An Asshat For So Long has finally been achieved. Can't wait for more!
THIS MEANS BABIES :D yayyyyyy they're TOGETHAAAA!!! so happy :) it's about DAMN TIME FOOL! jeezus. it's easier waiting for paint to dry than for these two to get together! so happy :) THIS MEANS DOUBLE DATES WOOOOOO
at the beginning, i thought tony was going to continue his douchey trend. but now i can honestly say that i'm relieved. thank god tony pulled his head out of his ass. this was so adorable and i can't wait to see how their relationship unfolds.
I can't wait to see what happens! <3