Lulu was my favorite character. I love the contrast in his personality- how he's so chaste, but a little sex kitten at the same time. I'm actually trying to create a character like that as well (but a little toned-down on the sex because he's 90% fluff xD) but it's kind of hard.
Oh, and for the record, Rembrandt is a beyond-amazing name. Good artist too xD And I laughed out loud at the last chapter because I finally realized that I never learned Nathan's name up until that point. Well, it was probably brought up earlier, but I don't remember.
And yes, I do realize that I'm way late on commenting about this xD
there were really very few negatives about this story, tbh (besides the obvious spelling/grammar mistakes that everyone misses no matter how hard you try not to. but those aren't important c:) i liked the style you wrote it in, i liked how you kept us hooked, i liked the drama put in there. your smut writing skills are also very good (XD) and i like that it was a happy story c:
i'm a bit iffy on the ending though, because as much as i like that you made the real climax concern nathan and rem's friendship, i think it could've been done a bit better. it just seemed a bit...rushed, tbh. and it didn't really wrap it up all that well for me. D: i like the intent behind it, but i think it could've been wrapped up a bit better. maybe jump ahead a few years or an epilogue or something like that? D:
i LOVE this story. IT was really good, and I loved how lulu really did love him all that time. :D i expect another wonderful story like this. haha jk,....but really, another story would be AWESOME!!! :D
i LOVE this story. IT was really good, and I loved how lulu really did love him all that time. :D i expect another wonderful story like this. haha jk,....but really, another story would be AWESOME!!! :D
:O oh no! i cant believe Rembrandt really punched him! ...i wonder how lulu is gonna take this... is it just me or did nathaniel not have a name before? 'cause i couldnt find one...
OH SNAP. :O As I have said before, I hate Remi. >.< He's such a douche. -_- Nathan (YAY! HE'S GOT A NAME NOW! :D) and Lulu are obviously meant to be together and Remi just needs to get the fuck over it and stop being a grumpy bitch. ^.^ Yeah, I don't like Remi at all. (: UPDATE SOON?! :DDD